Photographer’s Note
This is a mobile in the Washington Pavilion, a museum and performing arts center in downtown Sioux Falls. The visitor can spin it at the bottom and watch the wave move from bottom to top.
This re-post is to address the recommendations to crop the windows at right and burn in the lights. I burned them a bit - really they should be cloned out but I think that violates the TOS.
(Technical: Crop, Desaturate and USM)
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AdrianW
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(2237) 2003-09-16 17:47
Nice shot! Definitely an improvement over the original version. I love the contrasts in the shot, and the spiral pattern that draws you into it. I don't find the lights distracting, so I wouldn't worry too much :-D
cdewet
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(0) 2003-09-17 1:26
Hi, I like this much better. Stronger and better composition, and a happy smile
agarcia
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(393) 2003-10-01 12:54
Interesting geometry here! Certainly a good improvement from the previous post :-)
Photo Information
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Copyright: Leonard Linde (leonard)
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(17) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2003-09-06
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Canon PowerShot G5
- Exposure: f/2.2, 1/250 seconds
- Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
- Travelogue: Sioux Falls
- Date Submitted: 2003-09-16 16:59
