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Photo Information
Copyright: Larry Williams (lrw1966) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 275 W: 0 N: 296] (1006)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-27
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Ruins
Exposure: f/3.7, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-05-02 4:51
Viewed: 600
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sun up in my neighbors pasture. Bill tells me the old truck just died right there many years ago. He walked home (not a short distance - no cell phones at that time he said and laughted). His wife said it could stay there, she did not want it in her yard anymore. Bills, wife passed on recently, so I made him a Christmas card of the old truck. He called me after Christmas, cried a little and said he framed the best Christmas card he ever received. Made my heart fell good.

Thanks for looking in.
Larry

Long telephoto shot, cropped, light contrast, sharpened and sized for TE
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Hello!
Beautiful photo.Excellent lighting and colors.
Fantastic job.
Have a nice weekend
Tadeusz

Hi Larry.
I like this photo very much. This is a very interesting photo with a potential. Very nice composition and colours. I tried to do a workshop. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Best regards.
Mirek

Well composed Larry with the old windmill and the tight cropping. It's nice when people appreciate your work.
Phil

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  • tmx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 102 W: 0 N: 141] (1252)
  • [2008-05-19 3:51]
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hi Larry, nice nostalgic picture. It remainds me of my trip do Nevada (Death Valley), where are cars cementaries. love such places. about your image: nice composition and colours but of course I'd like it to be more sharpened or contrasted. workshop from bisok looks overcontrasted but definitely, it's not the perfect exposure. good luck in the future :)
ps. I like your US style and themes you show us.

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  • makis Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 26 W: 1 N: 48] (255)
  • [2008-05-21 2:28]
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Hi Larry,
this is an excellent picture to. I like the positioning of the elements in the frame and also the light and colours. Additionaly through the telephoto choice the hills beside the main motive came closer and give a very nice background.
Well done
Thomas

howdy.
looks like scene from a john steinbeck novel.
you have captured the moment perfectly.

your notes made this even more special.
Brian.
(tmx has hit the nail on the head; quote 'I like your US style'. spot on.)

Merhaba dear Larry
Wonderful composition and old truck.Wonderful light and naturel colours.Well done.
Best regards.
KaDiR.

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7613 W: 448 N: 10779] (54821)
  • [2008-07-17 14:30]
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Bonjour Larry,
on voit souvent cela dans les prairies en Belgique aussi, certains roulent encore, d'autres pas.
Une photo terne mais qui a l'air 100% naturelle.
regards.
daniel.

Hi Larry!
I like your subject! I like the way you describe old USA.
It is a pity that the picture is not sharp enough! But I like horizonta shape, both in the subject and in the picture

Ciao from Italy!!

Livia

Larry,
This is another fairly good image. I like the sentimental feeling for the past. The brown color blend in well witht the rustic truck. I like it the way it is much better than the workshop, that was quiet a strong contrast to the point of distorting the intregety of the photo. One minor that can improve this is to have more room on the top. It felt too tight and squeezed. I'm sure you have your reasons for cropping it that way. Thanks
Way

Hello Larry. This is a rustic looking image in wide frame suitable for the composition. Your neighbor pasture was well clipped by the morning sun exposing the warm color. Vintage looking truck worth restored. Try Overhaulin' :-) Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

Hello Larry,the story goes hand in hand with the picture,they need each other!
I like the subtle colours of the old rusting truck as it stays forever stuck in the landscape.
The windmill [is that what it is called?]sits in the perfect place in your composition.
Tfs, regards Jean.

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