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"Maple"


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Copyright: Archana Bhimasen (archanabhimasen) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 2 N: 31] (270)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Minneapolis
Date Submitted: 2004-11-01 8:51
Viewed: 915
Points: 10
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A glimpse of FALL in the backyard!
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  • adind Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 52 N: 113] (738)
  • [2004-11-01 9:03]
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I like the colours of leaves...the green and orange
mix in a beautiful manner..

best
atis

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  • sohrab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1360 W: 255 N: 1175] (7405)
  • [2004-11-03 14:20]

youve got some really nice colours here.
you should have perhaps taken advantage of this season and should have included the whole tree. maybe even more.
on the other hand you could have taken the shot of a single maple leaf lying on the ground or something, but i think that's too cliched now :)
anyway what im trying to tell you is that the one is somewhat in the middle ( very obvious , i know)
and there is just a feeling that something's missing . apart from the colours there's nothing else thats very intersting here. if you had capture a lone leaf lying on the ground you could have not only got a nice colour contrast between the leaf and the earth, but it would have allowed the viewer to concentrate on the leaf too. it looks like maple, but its a little tough to make out here.example: a lot of people in india and many other countries havent ever seen a maple leaf in their lives. with the lone leaf they could have got a somewhat decent idea about it.

on the other extreme , a nice scenery would have been appealing as well.
i dont mean to come down so hard on you or anything, just giving you more ideas.
take care :)

pretty cluster with some really pretty colors...

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  • sun_web Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 24 N: 165] (641)
  • [2005-01-05 18:14]

Brilliant colors! Nice shot.

Beautifull clear coloring, it announces your sensitivity for colors, hoping to see that you maintain this sense in your discovery in photographie.
Succes Archana
Henk

Hello, Archanab,

Thanks to your posting I have discovered your pictures. Here is one I like very much, and it gives me idea to send something og the same sort: It's sharp enough and well framed: The light is also very uniform and sweet.
Izzet Keribar

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