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Holland,MI(12)


Holland,MI(12)
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Copyright: Rajesh Srinivasan (rajhema) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 40 N: 289] (1817)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-05
Categories: Festivals
Camera: Canon EOS Rebel XT, 18-55 Canon EFS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-29 7:21
Viewed: 450
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken in Holland, MI
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To Ulishna: Thanks for your commentsrajhema 1 07-18 09:00
To PJE: Your critiques are most welcome Paul,,rajhema 1 05-30 09:29
To Lisas_world: I'm glad I impressed you with this picturerajhema 1 05-29 10:14
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Good morning, Rajesh,

I love how you just immerse my eyes in color. These variegated tulips are gorgeous in the sunlight.
With just flowers filling the frame, I wondered what makes the composition work? In looking at it small size, I realize it is the positioning of the random spaces between. Very attractive! I will have to look at your other 11 shots :)

Have a good day!
Lisa

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  • PJE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2171 W: 138 N: 3911] (18587)
  • [2006-05-30 0:12]
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Rajesh I see lots of wonderful color in this scene. I must agree with Lisa who asks about the composition in this scene. When I look this many tulips I ask myself what can I compose in the frame of the viewfinder that would make this scene interesting. Perhaps change the angle of viewpoint and make some blurred and others in focus. If there were a person picking a bunch that would also add interest. If you are going to create an abstract with tulips then perhaps try to compose a unusual and creative shape pattern with these flowers. Sorry for being critical.. this photo got me thinking about composition. It is certainly alot of color though.

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  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4588 W: 390 N: 4188] (18564)
  • [2006-06-08 12:23]

Hi Rajesh
Indeed this reminds me of Holland - great to see this from the MI as well.
Best regards
Jeppe

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  • light Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 18 N: 90] (857)
  • [2006-06-11 6:31]

Nice flowers shot, nice colors and nice composition too. Good framing and good light.

Well, Rajesh, with this picture and the one next to it, you've effectively shown us Holland, Mich., in two dimensions. I like how the tulips fill the frame in this photo. The colors are great; the concept, clear; the execution, simple and complete. Nicely done.

Hello Rajesh,
It's my favorite tuleps! Great shot.
Julia

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