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• PolarBear (12)
• [2006-02-11 14:04]
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This is an Interesting Candid Portrait. I like the subject’s facial expression. Nice color and detail. It is cropped a little too close, cutting off the top of the subject’s head. Other than that it is a great Photo.
Some Photographer's Notes would help in understanding the photograph.

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• Yellman (117)
• [2006-02-11 14:26]

yeah, more interesting this is...It´s funny picture :)

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• designsoul (21332)
• [2006-02-11 15:14]

I like it, Kasia; very fresh, very cool, very intimate and spontaneous, and with great precision. Love the way her hair is all over her face, in those spiky curls... well done!
sasa

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• plimrn (15572)
• [2006-02-12 12:39]

Hi Kasia,

Your composition conveys the trust and joy a great freindship.. Only a friend would turn such an open, unguarded expression toward a camera. Your excellent light and focus have captured the details well. I think you balance the missing top of the head by cropping just below the base of the neck or below the V of the shirt.

Regards, Pat

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• yigalco (366)
• [2006-07-08 9:36]

Hi Kasia,
I can't look at this photo without the feeling that I want to help here and move the hair to the side.
Nice photo and moment

Regards,
Yigal

Ps: what about new photos from you