A City Sunset
Across the roof-tops of the town
I saw the flaming sun go down;
For some, another day of tears
Lay buried in the hurrying years.
The shadows folded; here and there
A yellow light began to flare.
For some, another golden day
Of gladness sped upon its way
by Charles Hanson Towne, 1908
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avene (12675) 2009-03-16 19:28
love this photo, Maryori, especially the golden red colour cast, just the right touch of magic, and goes well with the poem. perspective is great, it immediately draws the eye in, while the single bright light is the perfect accent to the scene. romantic, philosophical, dreamy shot, I like it a lot.
Jedenj (273) 2009-03-16 20:23
Daily city scene made so beautiful, well seen, and well taken.
Khattakphoto (686) 2009-03-16 21:44
Very good colour especially the golden red colour. I like it
COSTANTINO (64766) 2009-03-16 21:47
Agreat photo with many details and particulary
this golden red colour which gives something different to the whole scenery..The perspecive is great,the whole presentation
nice and difficult I could say,nice quality shot
have a nice and pleasant day
mphotographies (1976) 2009-03-16 22:54
Nature can be so beautiful, never fails to delight us even on each passing day this sunset blankets our evening with its glorious light. Nice capture, steady hands on that G9, very inspiring shot.
jjcordier (79297) 2009-03-17 0:03
Très belle composition nocturne aux fantastiques couleurs. Belle maitrise de l'exposition.
Felip (3907) 2009-03-17 3:44
Bellísimos colores los de esta toma nocturna.
Buen control de la exposición.
Respira paz y tranquilidad por todod sus pixeles.
Buen trabajo Maryori.
dkeus31 (27735) 2009-03-17 4:20
Hi Maryori ,
a nice colored one, the fence is making a good strong diagonal.
RedDevil (1217) 2009-03-17 9:07
Perfect POV and management of ligth, excellent colors. Brava
Selmik (3457) 2009-03-17 11:51
I am amazed with Florida every time I see your photos.Each photo is unique in terms of presentation ideas,viewing angle,notes,colors,resolution.And this one is a no exception of the rule :-)
Beautiful warm colors, curved perspective and lanthorn as a strong accent to the photo.
Great work Maryori!
angie-barcelona (2784) 2009-03-17 14:16
una de las mejores fotografías que has publicado! Me gusta no sólo la perspectiva, sinó también la tonalidad y esas luces!
danos (97479) 2009-03-18 9:09
what a nice perspective and POV of this superb sunset scene!The subdued light, with the sun still painting pastoral colours in the clouds makes this a memorable shot.Excellent the management of the low light conditions.Well done.
Cretense (68703) 2009-03-19 7:14
Hola parcerita, de noche y de dia!
Ya sabes cuanto me gustan las fotos nocturnas, y tu tienes algunas tremendas en tu galeria! Este impresionante foto es seguramente entre las mejores! Gran encuadre y composicion, impresionante y dynamica perspectiva, perfecto manejo de la luz, preciosos colores! Perfecta!
Waylim (25502) 2009-03-19 11:15
This show you how people are infatuated with strong and intense color, this one recieve much more attention in some of your other shot, and a well deserved attention. I notice your night shots are much better than when I first started critiquing your work. Congratulations. I think you've come such a long way, I'm not really great at night shot myself, I think Jie is really wonderful with night shot. I'm just too lazy to set up tripod and carry it around with me all the time. This is really lovely with brilliant colors and good composition and the noise level is undercontroll. Thanks and a Big hug.
trekks (14348) 2009-03-20 5:51
A beautiful sunset in the city showing a great color tone and mood of the evening light. Not easy to compose a city view and your framing of the railing as FG feature works well here. The single street lamp here seems to compete with the natural light for attention.
buscape (6219) 2009-03-20 19:25
great nightshot with beautiful colors. Interesting POV and good depth. Very good composition. Congratulations.
baba_flies (8829) 2009-03-21 9:39
Hello Maryori! A humid and hot evening in Miami comes to my mind when I look at your photo although I have never been there ... as you know :))) I love the traffic that moves through without actually seeing it, fast and furious driving into town I guess. I love the railing on the side and how the street lamp reflects, and I guess this is the special thing in your photo, this warm orangy light on the railing. Very good, Maryori, you know how to play with evening light and what to make with it. Have a wonderful Saturday, Barbara.
azaf1 (15929) 2009-03-21 18:36
Just beautiful, Maryori
Those colors are really attractive and the blue hour has rendered a great effect. Perfect perspective and sharpness
Have a good day and TFS
belido (19934) 2009-03-22 10:14
stunning sunset shot. The right time for shooting, the right elements and the right colors and lights. The result? Something for our pleasure. Great, really great!
suzzz (399) 2009-03-22 12:32
simply stunning, marvelous with great amazing colors and perspective.. very moody shot with a warm atmosphere! the clouds added a great impact on the overall shot!FANTASTIC FRAME
all the best and TFS
luighi (5297) 2009-03-23 5:44
Solo se me ocurre decir , impresionante , excelente disparo nocturno , como no viniendo de una especialista como tu Maryori.Me encanta el dramatismo de ese cielo y el color muchisimo.Pefecto manejo de luz y exposicion.Bravo.
marietom (34609) 2009-03-23 9:46
J'aime beaucoup les couleurs de ce ciel, et cette superbe composition.
gunbud (34066) 2009-03-23 18:55
The long night time look across the bridge adds wonderful depth to this beautiful view of downtown Miami.
The gold and yellow sky is wonderfully complimented by the blue of the wispy clouds.
batalay (38775) 2009-04-01 17:08
A beautiful example of light management. I like the one point-perspective you have demonstrated in the composition. The colors are ethereal. Warm regards,
ElAprendiz (30) 2009-04-04 18:27
No puedo dejar pasar sin hacer un comentario sobre ésta magnifica toma nocturna. Me agrada mucho la perspectiva que has capturado, el dramatismo del cielo en el horizonte destaca altamente con la ciudad a lo lejos.
Cada elemento se detalla con nitidez, lo que da a entender que la exposición ha sido bien trabajada. Felicitaciones.
jorgi (3810) 2009-04-07 10:02
i'm really glad you still didn't give up on me :)
I would love to come on a meeting to meet you but yes...you are quite far away.
Until this is possible for me i will try to spent more time on pages of TE and i do not think that will be to hard since i have so many photos in front of me that are simply fantastic. This one surely is one of them, no doubt!
I love how you chosen your angle with fence leading towards the city scape of light on breathtaking red orange canvas. The result is stunning, a real joy to look at and goes wonderfully with the lyrics.
my very best regards,
vasilpro (41313) 2009-05-07 11:48
Beautiful composition, amazing light management, very good chosen POV, an excellent colorful sunset.
kokoro-zukai (10) 2009-07-06 23:35
The glowing of colours what makes it the star of the sunset, you're lucky to live in such tropical place.
rbcy1974 (20758) 2009-09-29 2:56
Veo que tu tambien andas desaparecida del sitio, bueno aprovecho mi reciente visita a Trekearth para visitar esta foto que me trae recuerdos de mis anos pasados en Miami. Muy linda exposicion y luz
- Copyright: Maryori Astrid (Colombiana) (2955)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-12-07
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1.25 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Mis nocturnas/ Night shots [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2009-03-16 19:24
- Favorites: 1 [view]