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l'eau et le ciel


l'eau et le ciel
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Copyright: did berard (dib) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 40 W: 0 N: 19] (277)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1999-02
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-03-07 15:29
Viewed: 1387
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Le lieu, Agua Azul dans les Chiapas, à quelques kilomètres de Palenque. Endroit magique
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To ilouy: hello, oui tu as raisondib 1 03-08 09:31
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Your frame is too heavy and the clarity of the image not the best one, though the colours are very nice. A note would be very appreciated by everybody

Nice picture. But it seems that the main subject, the water, the beach is a little fuzzy.
You have found here a part of the heaven.

The line running down the photo left of centre, and the blurryness show a better scanning job is needed. Great picture anyways. I actually like the framing, it makes the photographer seem distant and remote from the action.

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  • ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 346 W: 211 N: 172] (3344)
  • [2004-03-08 3:03]
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Petit endroit idylique! Blue lagon's adventure? heheheh ;-)
La couleur de l'eau qui se marie avec le rose de sable est vraiment magique. Encore une composition cadrée à la "paparasi" :-) cela donne une impression amusante d'être le voyeur planqué observant de loin sans vouloir être vu. La qualité du scan (s'il en est un) n'est pas nickel parcontre. Je pense que tu peux améliorer un peu cela étant donné tes compétences dans le domaine, non?

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  • LLB (0)
  • [2004-05-03 5:08]

I really like this photo for its imperfections. I think the colors flow much easier because it is not too sharp or defined. Good composition and framing using the tree.

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