Buntzen Lake

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• danielswalsh (12483)
• [2008-05-20 0:44]
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Hi Olga;

Having just read your bio- I'm from BC (born in Quesnel, most of my family now lives on Vancouver Island). We used to visit Uraguay from where we lived in Missiones, Argentina. Now as an adult- I'd love to go back for a visit...

Ths is a very clear shot and I like how you placed the trunk to the side of the shot. I would suggest a bit of a brightening of the shadows, about two fingers width cropped from the top of the frame (get rid of some of the plain/ overexposed sky), and about a fingers width off the right hand side of the image. Doing so, I believe would make for a much stronger image with more impact. I'll post a workshop when I get home from work...

Cheers!
- Dan

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• xavis (2794)
• [2008-05-20 1:48]
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Hola!
Un lago magnífico, con unas vistas impresionantes. La foto está bien compuesta con un buen encuadre. Lo que tal vez le falta es un pelin mas de luz y quitar un poco de cielo por arriba, para dar más protagonismo al lago con el tronco que sale en la superficie. Otra proposición hubiera sido de tomar la foto con un encuadre vertical, en ese caso tomando bastante cielo, para dar una mayor sensación de profundidad y de inmensidad del paisaje.
Bueno, me paro ya, espero que aporte algo este otro punto de vista.
En todo caso, vaya suerte que tienes de vivir tan cerca de estos paisajes.
Hasta la vista,

Javier

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• danasam (1037)
• [2008-05-20 4:38]
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Hi Olga, the most i like about this photo is the serene it gives me the moment i look at it. excellent composition and contrast, very well done on the colors management. regards.

Sam.