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Copyright: Animesh Ray (AnimeshRay) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 799 W: 50 N: 871] (8687)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-05-15
Categories: Daily Life, Humorous, Decisive Moment
Camera: Leica M6, Summicron 50mm/f2.0, Kodak TRI-X 400
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Sato: Toronto is a Trip!, My Stylesheet [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-05-27 13:45
Viewed: 873
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
At an art gallery.
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This is the strongest yet, I think. I can't believe you classified it as humourous! It's so creeepeee! But there is something funny about the mother and son (daughter?)... the little hat, plus the fact that he looks like he's floating. I mean, he looks superimposed! But he could also be dead... basically, it's a very odd juxtaposition, which makes me feel uncomfortable. nicely done.

Very strong, on par with "music" image, the dark humour in the image is very striking, all underlined by the high contrast between white walls, woman, little person and little poeple on the painting.
The little fella seems to be a part of the painting.
Superb.
Peter

A great juxtaposition - I wonder what the mother is thinking and if she is making the connection - the baby blissfully sleeping is nice - would have been interesting if the babe was awake and looking too! I think this is great - lots of ways to read it - always good for an image - get the imagination going!

best wishes Animesh

Kev

This is great.. What a funny picture. and your title is also nice.
I like the texture in this image with the big lines.. almost a cubist image.

Hi Animesh,
The link between life and art is so strong here :) I like the way all the little ones are just floating, facing the same way. You couldn't have hoped for a better arrangement. I appreciate the way this is kept so clean and uncluttered, with strong lines and blocks of contrast.

Another nice one Animesh. I like your composition very much here. Just wondering what is going on in the mother's head. As Lisan put it lingers between a strong message and humourous.
Bala
Greeny later.

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  • sandip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 296 W: 77 N: 371] (3485)
  • [2005-06-01 15:16]

haha.. This one really works well here.. A colorful life in B/W.The contrast between the lady and the background is too much. I would have expected a bit dark at the background here.. may be vigenetting kind of thing.And about the small baby ... U got a great eye to judge the frame Animesh.The hat and the sleeping mood of the baby.. looks like he/she is in his/her dream and doesnot mind at all.. a perfect juxtaposition..Oh i really find amazing that u included the small details like her glass..

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  • nerve Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 844 W: 82 N: 690] (10067)
  • [2005-06-02 5:31]

Wonderful juxtaposition really...every time i am amazed with your eye.. so imaginative..
the kid looks like she/he is floating in the air..
A great one again as usual from you Mr. Ray! :-)
cheers.

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