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Lonely Flower


Lonely Flower
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Copyright: Andreas Achleitner (Achleitner) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 119 W: 0 N: 72] (729)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-12
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Fuji FinePix S5700
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Canada
Date Submitted: 2008-01-20 8:08
Viewed: 644
Points: 18
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Really excellent POV, but I feel that the hue is adjusted a bit too much.

Hallo Andreas,
gute Idee, die Weite dieser Landschaft durch diese Perspektive darzustellen. Du hast die größtmögliche Tiefenschärfe erwischt. Auch gefällt mir, dass die Schienen den unteren und auch den rechten Rand 1/3 zu 2/3 teilen, der Fluchtpunkt liegt aber in der Mitte. Das ergibt eine schöne Bildaufteilung.
LG Christian

Hi Andreas!
Perfect frame of mind.Nice and straight eye here.Bright and pleasing one.(Best Wishes for your future)
Basit

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  • Wanda1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1208 W: 21 N: 1411] (7580)
  • [2008-01-20 10:15]

Hi Andreas,
I like your low point of view and your focus along the track. Great perspective with all the lines converging. But the sky seems to be a bit of an odd colour and does not look natural. Otherwise a nice idea!
Regards
Wanda

Hi Andeas,
Nice shot of this interesting rail road. Your composition and POV are fine showing the cabin from an angle giving us nice depth and detail. The lighting and color are fine with excellent sharpness.
Cheer,

Tola

Hi Andreas,

a dangerous hobby, photography ;-), looks like this railway is still in use. Great composition with these rails (I like the way you've put one in the centre of the picture) and the little flower. TFS, a note would be nice.

Wolf

Awesome composition, love the horizon line placement.

Hi Andreas,
A well spotted detail of the flower that pushes out of a shadow next to the rail. Stong perspective, excellent sidelight.
Kari

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6159 W: 3196 N: 7478] (27852)
  • [2008-01-21 3:12]

Hello Andreas
Il like this kind of sharp foreground who gives an intersting depht and perspective in your composition.
Well done.
Cheers.

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7173 W: 436 N: 9762] (49816)
  • [2008-05-14 14:25]

Bonjour Andreas,
tu joues bien avec les lignes de fuite ici pour donner beaucoup de profondeur.
J'admire le brillant du rail.
Un ciel un peu surexposé à l'avantage du reste qui bénficie de belles lumières.
Regards.
Daniel.

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