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bgladman
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(1153) 2004-03-25 15:40
Hi Sase, You have found a great subject and location for a photograph. I think you could improve this photo by cropping out the really light area of the wall as its distracting. Also the photo is not focussed, the girl should be sharp. I did a WS to show how i'd correct some of these issues.
Eileen
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(60) 2009-09-08 15:09
I like the ascending viewpoint of the photo and the composition. I agree with bgladman that it needed contrast and cropping. It's fun to check out different artists as they are presented to us. You have some other very interesting photos with blue windows and I've enjoyed looking at your work. Eileen
Photo Information
- Copyright: sase mihael (sase) (80)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-08-10
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2004-03-25 15:15
Viewed: 1085
Points: 2
