Photographer’s Note
Eastern Anatolia has a mountainous topography and it's hard to travel on intercity railroads. This picture is taken in a road between two towns that is closed because of a sheep herd.
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Mrcurtain
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 79 W: 40 N: 20]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif){kind=small}
(421) 2003-10-23 4:16
A good shot living up to the goal "learning about the world through photography"
I think that the shot could be improved by cropping away much of the top, and a fair amount of the right. What would be left would be the man leading the sheep, the sheep and the truck waiting - all of which are the real story telling elements.
It's also washed out and would be improved by adding some contrast.
mortijo
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2059 W: 210 N: 1972]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(12693) 2003-10-23 4:56
I agree with the lack of contrast and the cropping at the top. I am not so sure about cropping on the right, you could always try a more panoramic format.
clodreno
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(0) 2003-10-23 8:20
I just send a workshop. I like the picture but I redid the framing.
Deutscher
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(0) 2003-10-23 9:17
Nice picture and good composition!!
With workshop of clodreno it will be a little bit better-framed.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Onur Onur (JaguaR) (235)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-10-13
- Camera: Kodak DX4330
- Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2003-10-23 4:02
