The Pryer, a photo from Dubai, West

Photographer's Note

Dubai, Creek.
I usually won't take a photos of people without asking them first, but this shot I was at a boat in Creek and never had a chance to ask her permitions, I hope she will förgive me.
//Jamal

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valegnu (19) 2012-09-15 16:38

Hi Jamal, beautiful picture with the woman at the center of the scene (which gives coherence even more to the title). It 's interesting man in motion. He seems to leave the scene because he's in a sort of secondary role.
Very "cinematographic" :)
ciao ciao,
valegnu

trevormoffiet (927) 2012-09-17 2:58

Hi Jamal,
This is a great capture. I can see why you did not have time to ask permission. As a suggestion, try cropping out the man and the rock on the right and the light stand on the left. You will be left with a vertical format of the girl, her sandals and the facade of the building. In my mind that would make a very good, very strong image that tells a single story without the added distractions.
Regards,
Trevor