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waiting for fun in Flavius' town


waiting for fun in Flavius' town
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Copyright: leyla arilar (puzzle) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 52 N: 132] (700)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-02
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-05-07 13:24
Viewed: 822
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Susanoglu beach, anciently Corasium, built up by Flavius Uranius in Roman Empire.

I was there in my parents’ summer house in last week,was lucky to start the swimming season for myself cause the weather was so good…
It was fun except the little crabs, camouflaged perfectly… :)

That scene seemed gloomy to me at the moment, cause i am used to see it with full of enjoying people in summer…So i chose sepia color.

Leyla
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selam Leyla
güneşin ağaç yapraklarında parlayışı çok güzel, yunusçuklar da karaya vurmuşlar, hüzünlü bakıyolar
siz gittiniz ama biz hala burdayız, ve sizi bekliyoruz gibi bir edası var hem ağacın hem yunusların.

kompozisyon çok güzel, ağacın sol kısmında birkaç mm daha olsa daha güzel olurdu ama bunun dışında kadrajlama da güzel. Sepia yla güzel bir sonbahar görüntüsü kazandırmışsın.

Tebrik ederim
iyi çalışmalar
Başak

Hi Leyla. Nice smooth shot of the beach and the sea with good colour management. Seems to be a bit over sharpened. Otherwise, well done. Regards.
Partha

Merhaba Leyla,

Degisk bir aci, guzel bir kadraj olusturmususn... ama bana kontrast fazla gibi geldi... biraz daha calis :)

selamlar
hasan

Hi Leyla, A lovely sepia tone & a very well composed photo, superbly sharp with beautiful detail from the palm against the stunning sky, the little paddle boats help balence the shot up nicely, TFS, kind regards Wilson.

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  • Ertan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 585 W: 64 N: 248] (2977)
  • [2007-05-08 3:46]
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Merhaba Leyla
Güzel ve hoş kompozisyon.Sepia ton yakışmış.Başarılı çalışma yapmışsın.Ellerine sağlık
Selamlar
Ertan

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  • nisko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 442 W: 78 N: 274] (2389)
  • [2007-05-08 8:40]
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merhaba leyla,
very interesting composition,i like a lot the straight paralel lines of sea level(horizon is impresive).. sand.. path!Maybe the sharpeness in tree is some exagarate but creates a nice efe:)
regards..
thodoris

hello Leyla
simple and efficient composition, great impact, nice tones, good sharpness, great framing, well done
regards
jo

Hello dear Leyla,
Magnificient artistic photo with great composition and unusual choice of colours. Well done.
Cordially
Joël

merhaba leyla . fikir ve kadraj güzel ancak . doğallık biraz daha ön planda olmalıymış sanki.selamlar
İNAN

Sepıa tonlama ile mükemmel bir kompozisyon,palmiye ağacı,kara kalemle çizilmiş kadar hoş...
Ellerinize sağlık
Selamlar

Hi Leyla,
Nice picture. unusual colors however the effect is excellent.
good work.
jorge

Merhaba Leyla,
Deneysel çalışmanı başarılı buldum.Düşünce, kadraj, tonlama süper. yalniz keskinlik( sharpen) biraz fazla gibi.Eline sağlık.

hAyAti

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  • gbeli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 66 N: 230] (1915)
  • [2007-05-10 13:23]
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Hi Layla
I like your new photo.
Good choice of sepia color.
Althought i would prefer this photo without the boats.
Regards

Hi Leyla, already swimming time in turkey ? lucky you are ;)
Good choice of sepia, that reinforces the mood of the scene, without anybody, so peace and calm, yes this is a good choice. Your compo is minimalist and it's a good try :)
The picture is oversharpened but this has been already said.
Have a good week end :)

Hello Leyla,
I don't really like this photo... ):
I don't like the sepia effect, it's pale and oversharpened.
I just like the composition.
Sorry, but your other photos are much better!
Best wishes,
Marci

Hello Leyla!
Nice colours and clarity in your composition!
Beautiful place and lovely perspective!
Excellent done!
Lili

sepia tone fitting for this upload. nice POV and sharpness, and so picturesque.
benedict

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  • erel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 796 W: 0 N: 366] (9841)
  • [2007-06-04 15:36]
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merhaba
Farklı bir çalışma yapmışsın kadraj ve denge çok hoş kutlarım.EREL

Hi Leyla,
compo is ok but I'm not too sure about the sepia tone. It looks a bit oversharpened and it's really a pity because potentially this could be a great shot.
Regards
Igor

Merhaba Leyla,

Daha evvel görmedigim bu resim — kompozisyonu sahane, seçtiginiz "sepia" da güzel uymus. Corasium herhalde Romalilardan kalmistir. Sevgi ve saygilar,
Bülent

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