caravan of horses Aladaglar

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• sheepyak (180)
• [2006-11-28 19:31]
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Hi NB,

I think the composition of this photo is fine, with my eye meandering down from the mountains just behind the caravan. However, the image needs quite a bit more contrast. I also think saturating the sky more would add some much needed color to the otherwise barren landscape. I have done a WS, although I can't post it until tomorrow. Hopefully you will find it helpful. The image has good sharpness, and I was just noticing that once the caravan reaches the water, where will they go? Just a thought, makes the subject more interesting. TFS,

Chelsea

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• jrj (32767)
• [2007-02-22 4:45]
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Great nature NB and an interesting capture of the caravan really scaling the place. Maybe a little 'flat' way to present it an idea to change a little in the workshop

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• kmarscher (2859)
• [2007-06-04 20:39]

Spectacular view of an unusual voyage with great depth to the scene and spendid view of the mountains with cooperative cloud patterns. A smaller aperture might have worked nicely too without disturbing the exposure, yes?