<< Previous Next >>

sunset and child


sunset and child
Photo Information
Copyright: Mustafa GEZER (gezer947) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 42 W: 3 N: 3] (1725)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-27
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/1600 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-03 13:29
Viewed: 384
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
None
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekEarth members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To burGu: slmgezer947 1 05-03 14:13
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Very nice use of the light, Mustafa. The child seems to be in his own dream world, separated from normal earthly surroundings. The composition is good, too, with the gently winding paths. I wish the child was more separated from the dark area above, but not every detail can be perfect in a candid shot. Great overall! Regards, Ken.

  • Great 
  • burGu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 29 N: 482] (2372)
  • [2008-05-03 14:12]
  • [+]

Merhaba Mustafa Bey,
Isik ve golge oyunlariyla dikkat ceken bir fotograf
Solda bankin kavisine ve sagda cocugun golgesine teget gecen kadraja bayildim.
Bankin kavisli sekli, ustundeki ahsap parcalardan yansiyan isik super.
Ellerine saglik,
Burcu

Hello Mustafa,
wonderful use of light. The photo is very inviting. Would be interested to hear where you took this.
Regards,
Linda

merhaba mustafa bey

ışık kullanımı çok güzel...
bankın kıvrınlı yapısı fotoğrafa güzellik katmış gerçekten..
tabii çocuğu da unutmamak gerek o da baya güzel bir katkıda bulunmuş...
ellerine sağlık

veysel

Hi Mustafa,
The curve and light make it a beautiful picture, I love it...
The effect graphic playing with the child.
Regards
Philippe

Hi Mustafa,
A nice visual impression in warm tones and interesting shadows.
tfs,
CT

merhaba Mustafa Bey
çok hoş bir kompozisyon. s şeklinde kıvrılan bank modelin eğilmiş olması ve topun yuvarlaklığıyla bütünleşmiş
tebrikler
zeynep

Selam Mustafa.Kadraj,renk grafik oturmuş.Tebrikler

  • Great 
  • xavis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 343 W: 84 N: 571] (2794)
  • [2008-07-02 12:35]

Very nice play with lights and shadows. The graphism of this picture is awesome. The only little probleme is the girl, who is with a little too much distorsion. But any way, a really nice picture, and different from the great majority of pictures in TE.

Hasta la vista,

Javier

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF