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My Children shadow


My Children shadow
Photo Information
Copyright: Zadok Shmuel (zadok) (60)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-04
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Silhouettes and profiles [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-10-05 8:44
Viewed: 946
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
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To flydragon: Hellozadok 1 10-05 17:58
To Luko: Hizadok 1 10-05 09:02
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  • Luko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2706 W: 503 N: 2853] (13477)
  • [2004-10-05 8:53]
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Welcome to TE Zadok, this is a minimalistic shot but yet very meaningful, it tells a story in its own. Excellently done (except maybe the yellow framing.. :( ...).

Good composition and interesting light on floor, compliments and welcome to TE

Hi Zadok and welcome to TE :-D
A very impressive first photo you present us with. Excellent use of shadowplay and the tilted windowframe. I agree with Luko about the frame.

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  • Aegean Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1423 W: 14 N: 745] (2559)
  • [2004-10-05 10:06]

Great silhouette shot Zadok! Looks like scene from a shadow theatre performance! I agree with Luko about the frame...Very well done and welcome to TE!

Welcome Zadok. nice first photo. good composition with shadows. bravo

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  • sunny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1177 W: 2 N: 981] (3068)
  • [2004-10-05 12:20]

Very creative shot of shadows in only two colours, Zadok! Expressive and candid, with a lot of feelings emanated. Very well done and welcome to TE! :-)

Creative shot, I like the mystery left behind this one and the fact that you can only guess what is happening between these 2 children.

The fact there is only 2 colours in this shot is great as well.

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  • alimo3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 489 W: 112 N: 97] (6680)
  • [2004-10-05 16:58]

hi zadok,
welcome to TE and congratulation for this firt good picture.
warm colors efficient and good composition .
good job

Tom

Shalom and Welcome to TE Zadok
verry interresting first picture
and also really graphic
your picture is also verry symbolic ,o)
bravo
hope to see more off your work
i am not crazy about the yellow framing also
i dont think that help your photograph
the picture is good, no need artifice around
••simon••

Grande momento bem registrado com muita sensibilidade. Cumprimentos.
Tony.

Zadok,
as I loved this one when I saw it in jugend, I love it here.
Great framing and great use of shadow.

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  • zamsh Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 12 N: 36] (445)
  • [2004-10-25 1:55]

love the way you told your sun to stand with his hand wide open. asking the sister to take his hand and join him (playing mabey).
Great connection seen between them.

Original idea!
Well done.
Marco

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