It is no fun Photo

Photographer’s Note

Humid rain
Every day I wait in pain
My dried up mind drains
My wings are too wet to fly
My monsoon of washed up life

Humid rain
High above me droplets are born
The get crashed to the ground beneath me
I confess my reality is no fun
To be just another one wishing for some sun

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Haifa beach

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Mateja (413) 2007-12-29 1:50

Dear Gilad,
your photo is very poweful and very heavy, because of the wet land and the black figure in the center. I think is a great composition, where you can sense the sea, but you don't see it.
But does it has to be so sad?
Mateja

andreineamtu (466) 2007-12-29 2:26

very nice composition, sharper focus would have worked better. i like it on black and white. 2 points because it has a strange charm like this out of focus, and you might have done that on purpose..

david_P (222) 2007-12-29 2:33

Hello Gilad,
just wonderfull shot ! I really like it,
Thanks for sharingd

David

abanibi (747) 2007-12-31 4:04

Hello Gilad! Great idea to have the reflection in focus and the rest blurry! The strong lines and the symmetry are well accompanied by the contrast to create the strange atmosphere of the place.
Well done!
TFS and best regards,
Inés

fkostas (444) 2008-08-17 9:33

Gilad,

Reminds me somewhat of a scene from John Carpenter movie, "Prince of Darkness", which is uneasy and brilliant.

Farah