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Windows and shadows


Windows and shadows
Photo Information
Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21138)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-07
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Fuji FinePix F601Zoom
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/350 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-07 14:36
Viewed: 800
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My first Turning Autumn Hunt photo - Windows.
This is a fresh photo, taken a few hours ago. This is the place where we spent the two last days. Elevation is 212 metres below sea level, weather is hot and dry, and the sunlight is harsh, just the way I like.

Tech:
Camera: Fuji FinePix F601Zoom, Auto mode.
Cropped.
Added contrast and reduced brightness.
Sepia tones.
Resized. sharpen and added a frame.

Georges, Michael_Gan, Jeppe, nwoehnl, summer89, ChrisJ, jhm has marked this note useful
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  • Great 
  • c_kyr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 822 W: 88 N: 343] (1810)
  • [2004-08-07 14:40]

Great photo.
The two identical windows with the different shadows make a wonderful composition.
Very well done!

  • Great 
  • torben Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 964 W: 331 N: 578] (3063)
  • [2004-08-07 15:02]

The arches and the strong b/w pattern invites to enter the puzzling labyrinth of shapes and shadow. It's difficult to read what is actually going on behind that wall but it manages to keep my attention anyway, nice work.

Hey yitzhak, this is nice, I'm always fond of shadows, and this one's so nice around that gate! Gone for the weekend again, weren't you? Couldn't keep your mind of TE? I like the way you converted it to B&W, good choice.

Hmmm.. interesting and puzzling shot. It takes some time to comprehend what we are looking at! Very nice combination of soft and sharp lines and shadows and very big contrasts between white and black.

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  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4590 W: 390 N: 4188] (18552)
  • [2004-08-07 16:15]

I like the symmetri in this shot - the two "windows" should be the same - but due to shadow theres a big difference - a fine contribution to the hunt - I must concider starting my hunt soon - if I can find the time.

Very good inaugural entry into the new scav hunt, Yitzhak. Great contrast as ever so often in your work, and intriguing combination of the arched and grid shapes as well as a grand play of shadows. Well done.

Superbe photo. j'aime beaucoup la composition bien équilibrée et les ombres sur le mur ajoutent une dimension supplémentaire à la photo. c'est très bien fait. félicitations

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  • Piotr Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1004 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-08-07 18:38]

Nice composition, two symetrical windows and interesting shadows, well composed
Regards, piotr

Hi Yitzhak,

Good photo this one. I like the composition and the ligth.

Well done

  • Great 
  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8720 W: 917 N: 11589] (56203)
  • [2004-08-08 3:02]

Good choice of b&w. Well lit & composed. Almost abstract, the way the palm tree? shadow falls across the archway.

La prise est plutot interessante et la mise en forme avec cette dessaturation ajoute un effet mystere.
le resultat est interessant.
Bravo Yitzhak

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12556 W: 269 N: 16620] (66480)
  • [2004-08-08 7:21]

Yes Yitzhak, interesting and puzzling image, very nice combination of soft and sharp lines and shadows and very big contrasts between white and black, a wonderful composition too.

Très beua jeu d'ombre et de lumière accentué par le noir et blanc, très belle réalisation; Bravo.

What a nice one Yitzhak! A very, very fine entry to the hunt, superb B&W sepia processing, nicely composed, good symetry, well cought light and nice resultng shadows on the facade. A beautiful picture.

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