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Big spring cloud over the city


Big spring cloud over the city
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Copyright: daniel yoffe (pastadog) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1677 W: 249 N: 2460] (10821)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-16
Categories: Nature, Architecture
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-22 4:11
Viewed: 882
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sometimes the elements enhance this view, from Jaffa hill.

I was going to write about possible interpretations of this cloud over the city, but well, I hope it has some optimistic message; after all it's springtime already.

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  • Muse Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2363 W: 199 N: 5551] (23518)
  • [2007-03-22 4:14]

Bonjour Daniel,
Une très jolie photo. Le cadrage est tout bon avec ces knifofia rouges à l'avant plan et la ville en bordure de mer.
De très belles couleurs sous un superbe ciel.
C'est très beau!
Best regards
Denise

Bonjour Daniel
Plutôt sympathique cette photo bien cadrée. Tu as disposé d'une belle luminosité pour mettre l'ensemble en valeur et les fleurs rouges au premier plan sont du plus bel effet.
Bravo - merci pour le partage et bonne journée.
Nicole

delightful view, daniel, but i think that there is slightly too much going on in this image, packed with so many elements to concentrate on we actually cannot choose which element(s) is/are the subject(s) of the image - is it the shore?, the cloud? the plants? the blocks along the shoreline?....
bit too much in the foreground for a seascape,
bw, j.

hi daniel
great composition,POV and the colors
regards,anes

Hi Daniel
I like this sharp shot with vivid colors. Perfect composition
Cheers
JP

Nice colors, great POV.

Hi Daniel,

A good POV of the flowers, of the city and of the beautiful sky, the photo has a good composition, DOF and nice colors. Have a nice day.

Pierre

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4183 W: 86 N: 5096] (24803)
  • [2007-03-22 13:04]

Hi Daniel,
fantastic view with greAt sky and the foreground is realy suberbe.
Regards, Gerrit

Hi Daniel,
I like the perspective from the point you take the shot.So many levels from the colourful intro to the city and the sky...
Friendly Regards,
Thomas

Hi Daniel,
I like this photo, the flowers in foreground create a nice natural frame to the landscape, where the city, the beach, the sea with the waves, and the magnificent sky with the enormous clouds they form an agreeable at sight and very effective composition. Good shot, and caught good the environment and the spring feeling.
Best regards,
Josep

Hello Daniel!
Beautiful point of view and nice colours and sharpness!
Lovely place!
Excellent done!
Lili

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  • thor68 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 775 W: 144 N: 859] (4786)
  • [2007-03-22 19:23]

hi daniel, nice to see more of yafo! :-)
the view is really amazing and so is the big white cloud.
the composition with the red flowers in the fg
is terrific, and there are so many nice details to discover,
but - it may be my eyesight or monitor *g* -
i find there is a slight lack of DOF,
because the focus seems to be on the flowers
and from the green trees on the left on things
look OOF - the sea on the left is just a big
grey mass and the skyline of Tel-Aviv lacks of sharp details.
for a greater DOF 1/400 and f/8 instead of 1/1250 and f/5.6 would may have been better.(IMHO *lol*)
anyway, well seen & a great idea!
take care & photos, thor.

Pretty panoramic view and beautiful composition Daniel, DOF is great as the cloud over the city, clever use of the beautiful plant as foreground, well done, compliments.
Have a nice week-end
Ciao
Vinicio

Hello Daniel
Really well done,
THe DOF is excellent capturing very well all the details from front to back. I like the way you have mixed the flowers and the sky and clouds
Well done
Regards
Daniel

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