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Endless Winter


Endless Winter
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Copyright: Talia Harari (Talia) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 104 W: 0 N: 39] (242)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-01
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus Camedia E-10
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-21 17:01
Viewed: 496
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In Tel-Aviv, the "drummers beach" near the Dolphinarium. I sit on these slaeem and ponder may things Here they seem endless. This spot brings fishermen, families, lovers, artists and me.

It was a little chilly, but these winter sunsets are beautiful in Israel.

Peace~

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  • Miks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 495 W: 69 N: 219] (1703)
  • [2007-01-21 17:07]

Fine low angle. It is a good thing that the symmetric composition gets broken by the figures in the foreground on hte right. Otherwise it might have been too dull. But now it kinda works for me. I think it might be more effective in BW if you get some more contrast in there (via level + curves, say). I don't have PS on this computer. Otherwise, I would have tried a Workshop. But i like it as is.

Cheers,
Mikkel

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  • jmcl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2589 W: 146 N: 3421] (11904)
  • [2007-02-06 19:51]

Hi Talia,

I agree with Miks that the people help break up the symmetry and that is a good thing .. the endless depth you have captured .. and amplified with your low point of view is great.

take care,

John

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