The coffee shop

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• mitternacht (1836)
• [2003-12-31 11:45]

This is an interesting picture, it doesn't look like a typical café to me... I think it would benefit from a tighter crop focusing on the man. The long exposure time gives life to his gestures but the window is way too bright. There is also a slight tilt that could be
easily corrected.

One point for interesting information and capture.

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• dmartnyc (0)
• [2004-01-03 11:18]

Interesting capture. The slight hand movement adds something here. Love the light cascading. I do agree that a tighter crop might be more effective. Good work.

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• clodreno (0)
• [2004-01-23 3:35]

Very nice image Amitai. I like it a lot. The fact that his hand sis blurry.
Here i'll try a workshop. Don't you want them??It seems that you don't allow them..