A square near the Givatayim Theater. Actually, it's an artwork of sevrel colorful pylons, which are bent one towards each other. Looks like they're trying to send lightnings at each other.
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nwoehnl (122) 2003-12-08 3:52
Very nice work, Yitzhak. At first this looked like a b&w picture to me, but then I realized some reddish color on the posts (which might even look good a little stronger). The backdrop of clouds looks good also. Great eye on this one!
clodreno (0) 2003-12-08 3:56
Very nice shot Yitzak. It's amazing what you did..It look kie a monster.
olli (2091) 2003-12-08 4:09
Very interesting subject – there is much power in this shot. Very effctive mix of horizontal, vertical and diagonal lines. Well framed. I think this could work better in B&W.
martin (1242) 2003-12-08 4:23
A really powerful image. Such great shapes. Well seen, Yitzhak.
joso (2417) 2003-12-08 8:38
I don't know if you overexposed or work on software to hide the colours of the pylons - but who cares?
The result is great. Looks dangerous, has a lot of dynamic, given by the different forms and lines on the background of that stormy clouds, and accentuated by the frame.
Aegean (2571) 2003-12-08 10:55
Great composition and very dynamic angle of take...Very well done!!!
joseelias (0) 2003-12-08 11:56
You fooled me with this one! When I saw it I thought what kind of trick with PS did you use...
Good composition as you didn't use perfect symetry and created a soft diagonal with pylons.
cdewet (0) 2003-12-09 14:39
Hi Yitzhak, looks like two Titans fighting - great abstract.
emax (919) 2003-12-09 17:19
I do not know for what excactly it serves this thing, but for sure makes a good composition for an abstract shot. The gray cloudy sky in this case makes a suitable background, but the black frame its too thick.
orme (7219) 2003-12-10 0:51
An interesting shot with a lovely uniform background. As I look at it, I half expect bolts of electricity to shoot across the gap. Well seen.
dsidwell (9783) 2003-12-12 0:25
Superb use of sillhouette here! Composition is really nice with the objects just off center. I like the gray sky behind, too.
mcreider (673) 2003-12-13 5:34
Now Tzahi (or Itzik?) this is really good. Very simple, laconic and yes funny
femkevdh (2633) 2003-12-14 14:21
sorry, offline for a while.. nice results of the last days! I like the silhouets and your framing. Surprising effect.
- Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) (22107)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-12-06
- Categories: Artwork
- Camera: Olympus C-720
- Exposure: f/6.3
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): High Voltage, Just look up! [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-12-08 3:27