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Snow Baby
Photo Information
Copyright: Yael Manis (Yael5766) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 6 N: 20] (191)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-30
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus Camedia D-560 ZOOM, Olympus Zuiko Digital 14-45mm 1:3.5-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part VI [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-02 21:58
Viewed: 592
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A little girl watching the older kids play in the snow.
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To kato: much appreciated!Yael5766 1 02-03 05:10
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Hi Yael,

Well composed and lovely cute baby!
I think that the comparison between girl's clothes and a pure-white snow draws out the effect to the whole.
If I say the desire a little, you should put the shadow because the snow is a little monotonous, and devise how to make the frame a little though I am also immature now.
Anyway, I tried a workshop, yet this is my taste and I hope that you don't mind.

Regards,
mikio

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  • orod (10)
  • [2008-02-03 7:06]

Hi Yael!
What a nice girl!
regards
Davoud Khani

Hello Yael,
The little girl is well placed in this composition and stands out well with her bright red outfit against the white snow. I think the workshop of Mikio looked good. the snow had more contrast and definition.
Regards
Santo

Hello Yael,

In this nicely composed shot you've captured the little girl beautifully. In perhaps her first exposure to the snow, how bewildering it must be. But then, everything is new. The thin red line frames the image effectively.

Warm regards,

Bulent

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