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• Wandering_Dan (2952)
• [2007-12-09 10:01]
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Hello, Yael -

It seems you are doing a series of beggars; perhaps you should up a theme.

This is similar in pose to yesterday's shot, but I think this one is better, technically - the lighting in particular. I'm not sure whether or not to suggest that cropping on the left might make it better; I keep going back and forth on it.

Whereas in your other shot the woman looked both resentful and resigned, here the fellow just looks asleep. Interesting contrast!

Shalom,
Dan

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• sayeed_rahman (956)
• [2007-12-09 10:09]
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Hello Yael

Like the light around this place,the colours and layers add an apt dimension..overall a commendable finish..unconventional pov

Good job and well worked out :)

Cheers
Sayeed

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• atlantida (2230)
• [2007-12-09 11:45]
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Did u leave him a coin just to pay him for taking a photo of him while he was sleeping (I assume)?
Technically speaking, it;s not the best quality but I don't mind that in this kind of shots, it's too selfish to mind about that.

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• Glint (1898)
• [2007-12-11 14:41]
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hello yael,
what a striking picture. i would say i like it except that it makes me want to weep. but that is what good pictures do...elicit a stron response.
regards
Bev