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The Bridesmaid's Braids


The Bridesmaid's Braids
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Copyright: amos na (anadai) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 0 N: 52] (2409)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-07-10
Categories: Festivals
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4500
Exposure: f/3.3
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2003-07-13 3:32
Viewed: 2760
Points: 10
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Very interesting shot! I like the angle and the background works very nicely with the subject. My only comment would be to clone out the black wedge on the lower right hand side. Apart from that, a wonderful shot. Good work!

Interesting shot - well done. The only thing is the cropping - there is little 'headroom' and lot's of empty space on the left. As Fil correctly observed, this black thingy on the right should be removed / cropped out.

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  • Mike Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 331 W: 95 N: 36] (693)
  • [2003-07-13 4:32]

A very pretty shot of an equally pretty young girl, beautifully focused, as Fil and William suggest, crop the black area away, it's so small it won't even be noticed!

very nice shot.i would try to improve the right side of the picture,doing so will make this a perfect one.kol hakavod!

Very nice shot! Well enlighted, clear and very sharp.
As the people before me already said, a crop would improve...

I made a photoShop to illustrate what I mean.

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