Photographer's Note
The 4th photo of my Tel Aviv Cameri Theater theme.
No post-processing, no cropping.
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nwoehnl
(122) 2003-11-12 4:18
Very well done again! This one almost gives me a feeling of vertigo, as it looks you dangerously bent over to take this shot. The brown pillars lead the eye into the image, and seeing the different levels/floors (of which you included just the right amount in the composition) perfectly conveys the scale.
olli
(2091) 2003-11-12 4:30
nwoehnl already said it – so I just want to add some words: I like how you framed also the feet and those people leaning against the rail. I also like the design of those chairs and tables. Very well done.
clodreno
(0) 2003-11-12 7:45
Another vey nice composition of yours. Sorry for the very short critic, I am out of time...
orme
(7205) 2003-11-12 11:48
Another excellent shot from this theater. Good perspective with the help of those dark construction beams. Well captured.
Ebbe
(9617) 2003-11-12 13:10
Can´t you remember that I´m afraid of heights? The perspective really works in this one, feeling of height is normally almost hopeless to convey in picture. Great shot.
cdewet
(0) 2003-11-12 14:22
Apt title, something that churns my insides around is heights. I would loose the two off decapitated people at the top, though. They distract from the feeing of the scene. Otherwise, put their heads back on.
PLD_images
(7149) 2003-11-12 16:32
Great shot Yitzhak. I like the 2 giant beams that plonge down to the ground. I agree with the rest, this photo gives off a feeling of vertigo. Nicely done again.
p.s. crop the guy keep the girl - hehehe (joke)
joseelias
(369) 2003-11-12 18:29
That theater is very interesting. The colors are really appealing.
I think the title sums all in this picture. The pillars channel well our vision straight down into the table. Also, the people help identify the different levels and add a subtle action. Very nice.
Matias
(191) 2003-11-12 19:37
this shot reminds me the way I use to look to my feet... :)))
I must agree with Cdewet regarding to those heads you "chop" off... :O))
Anyway. It is a great captation, and the mix of different elements are well added here.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11)
(21954) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-10-00
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Olympus C-720
- Exposure: f/2.8
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): The Cameri Theater, Tel Aviv, Vertigo [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-11-12 3:35
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