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summer breeze
Photo Information
Copyright: Danny Carmon (dannyc7) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 1] (358)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-07-26
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Minolta Dimage S404
Exposure: f/3.6, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2003-07-27 14:45
Viewed: 727
Points: 10
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Very nice shot!

  • Great 
  • paquis (104)
  • [2003-07-27 17:41]

I like the textures, the lights and the composition of this shot !

nice texture..and the tones are grey-green which add to the creepy mood..but maybe they are a bit too green..
I find the reflection of the AIRCO disturbing, maybe u should go again in a different hour of the day.

i like the idea,nice photo.
Am mistoveving myself in Neve Zedek and other areas and will post those pictures soon.
see if you like the other version on WS.

  • Good 
  • greg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 653 W: 310 N: 95] (2837)
  • [2003-07-30 9:20]

Needs the perspective straightening up a bit, but this is a great variation on the usual window shots. Here's a window that's DOING something... I like the underexposure, too.

now this is one of the views I can never have enough of. as someone who grew up in tel aviv when there were no new buildings, I came to find these old and falling apart houses to be so beautiful... I just love them so much.
I like the motion of the curtain. the rotten wood in the window frame and the rust on the aircondition. weird me. :)
its so telling a story for me

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