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Skorj (581) 2003-06-30 6:37
An interesting idea, but minor some problems in finishing. Try and avoid the 'subject in center-frame' scenario, it often flattens the photograph's message (though not always).
To help perhaps, look at other photographs on TrekEarth and see how good ones (the ones that appeal to you) are framed. Then, imagine your subject in that other photograph?
Your background and DoF use is good otherwise. It is also a good TrekEarth feel image, conveying something about Israel as well as being interesting to look at.
You also appear to have a consistant set of top of frame artifacts?
sita4ram (814) 2003-07-22 9:30
now this has got to be 'kikar atarim' I grew up there. :) I love the place and the atmosphere.
Im guessing friday morning (if you are hightech) or saturday morning, by the population on the beach.
about the composition, well, I feel strongly that showing more of the bottle, and placing it at the left/right 1/3 of the image would have gotten you a much better result. as its too centered right now.
keep on the good job