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My family, Darwin style


My family, Darwin style
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Copyright: Gilad Benari (gilad33) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 857] (13490)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-24
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70, Sigma 70-300 ll APO
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Safari - Ramat Gan [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-07-24 15:45
Viewed: 818
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 11
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Safari, Ramat-Gan

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I like the composition and subject interesting, however, I do find that this picture is a little too dark and looses the detail of the animals fur. A little bit of colour balance and curves adjustment to lift the shadows in order to see the fur detail could make this an excellent picture.

This is a wonderful picture, and great colours. I love its shades. A fab!

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  • mpb001 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 125 N: 375] (4546)
  • [2004-07-24 19:34]

This is a very good shot. I think that perhaps it could be sharpened a little. If your were to lighten it a little it might also cause a problem with the background which is already overexposed, but the animals are very dark. It's a rather tricky exposure. You could selectively use the magic wand tool and curves to lighten the animals then sharpen the whole scene just a little. You have a winner here.

An excellent capture. I do agree that is is a little bit dark, but the DOF and the composition are wonderful.

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  • Japie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 77 W: 1 N: 14] (72)
  • [2004-07-25 9:40]

I like your family. I also think it is a bit on the dark side ( next time take your family pictures in a studio). Due to the darkness of the fur and the very light background, it will take some post processing to get it better. Still a good shot.

Regards to the family

Japie

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  • robiuk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2017 W: 176 N: 2285] (9849)
  • [2004-07-26 16:34]

Very interesting photo, Gilad!
I like the feel of it, the atmosphere and most of all I like that colour of the grass!

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