Rail

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• jrj (32672)
• [2004-01-29 4:01]

The diagonal line, the structure of the rail in the fine rusty setting adds to a fine total of this detail from the world of rails.

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• clodreno (0)
• [2004-01-29 4:04]

Interesting shot Yizthak. i would like it to be tighter may be.. Just without the weeds..

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• olli (2091)
• [2004-01-29 4:05]

Interesting rusty subject, nice diagonal lines, well framed. And those white stones are a nice detail – but I think something is missing...

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• henrye (3493)
• [2004-01-29 4:14]

Nice shot Yitzhak. I agree that something is probably missing, but it is still good and you captured the textures very well.

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• glider (690)
• [2004-01-29 4:21]

Nice rusty shot Yitzhak. I like color tones and contrast between white sleepers and rusty rail. Simple, but interesting.

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• orme (6576)
• [2004-01-29 6:49]

The textures are great, Yitzhak. The white / grey concrete contrasts well with the rusting railtrack. Framing the shot to show both of these in equal proportion might also have been good. Well seen.

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• nwoehnl (60120)
• [2004-01-29 6:53]

Another fine rusty detail, Yitzhak. Good contrast of the rail to the white stones and structure behind.
I'm not sure what is missing. Maybe you should have gone for a closer closeup filling your whole frame with rust, or for a shot from a greater distance that shows some more of the surrounding angles and shapes. However, your "middle ground" solution is still good.

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• PLD_images (7102)
• [2004-01-29 6:54]

You should really think about doing a rust theme. You have a lot of good pictures that include rust.

This is a good photograph Yitzhak. I like the angle that you have chosen for this one. It has good strong lines. The colors are good and again I like the frame that you used. Another good shot from you.

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• manny (21348)
• [2004-01-29 9:12]

I see a lot of diagonal line compositions today...interesting. Anyway, this shot would look good if it is cropped tighter. There seems to be something missing. Your shot usually have the "x" factor but this one seems to fall short on that (I can't explain what). Anyway, this shot succeeds in terms of colors and texture.

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• swallace (968)
• [2004-01-29 10:09]

Yitzak,

The composition is good and I love the texture/color of the rust. I think it's a very nice photo. We have a lot of antique farm implements around the place, so I'll have to see if I can find some interesting "rusty" shots also. Good job!

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• lemon_logix (1054)
• [2004-01-29 10:59]

colors and texture is nice. But i find the top part where the stones are a little distracting. I would have cropped that part away. What do you think?

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• joseelias (361)
• [2004-01-29 12:09]

I like this close-up and point of view with the stong diagonal crossing the composition.

The rust and textures are great also, but I think the white stone at the top is competing a bit with the rail. Maybe selecting it and reducing the lightness would work.

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• Georges (11175)
• [2004-01-29 15:07]

Très belle présentation et la perspective est bonne, interessante.
Les couleurs on un bon rendues et cette attache nous retient on obtenant la place maîtresse de l'image.
Bravo Yitzhak