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1.80m


1.80m
Photo Information
Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21130)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-11
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Olympus C-720
Exposure: f/4.5
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2003-12-04 3:30
Viewed: 793
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A grain car is waiting for its turn to unload wheat at the grain silos of Bney-Brak. I guess 1.80m is the distance between the wheels.

Special thanks to David Sidwell for the technical support.


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Nice shot Yitzakh, I love the contrast between the colors.

I like the contrast (red-yellow) and shades of red color. Nice picture Yitzhak.

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  • nwoehnl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9506 W: 682 N: 15167] (60120)
  • [2003-12-04 4:11]
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Interesting composition, Yitzhak. At first glance it appears to be quite symmetric, but then it becomes interesting to explore deviations from the symmetry. Colors and textures are very good here. I notice they again are red and yellow, as in the Roma scarf the horse in your previous posting was wearing. ;-)

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  • smil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 101 W: 15 N: 23] (561)
  • [2003-12-04 4:12]
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I can guess that you have already cropped a little bit the top of this shot. I would have like to see more at right and left size, to see the complete system holding the wheels (I don't know the name in english) because his form seems very interresting graphicly. The yellow part needs to be sharped a bit. Except that, I like this pic !

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  • Abocc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 203 W: 44 N: 21] (3274)
  • [2003-12-04 4:19]

It's an interesting composition, very well balanced. The colors saturation also is very attractive

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
  • [2003-12-04 4:56]

I like the fact that this picture is unique: composition-wise and subject-wise. The contrast of red and yellow is also well-seen and the details are wonderful. Good shot!

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  • orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2013 W: 139 N: 1496] (6576)
  • [2003-12-04 5:13]

Not knowing much about grain cars, I find the pinkish / yellow colours beautiful and yet strange for pieces of heavy metal. Definitely unique. Good one, Yitzhak. Well seen.

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  • olli Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1234 W: 995 N: 64] (2091)
  • [2003-12-04 5:42]
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Great contrast between colors. I also like the white numbers. Very interesting shapes/details.
I would crop a bit from the bottom.

Le cadrage est bien fait et les couleurs sont belles . une composition originale.

Nice color contrast and interesting details. This subject deserves some other photos Yitzhak. Have you thought shooting from the ground and near the wheels pointing up? you could get some nice photos. You'll get a little dirty and people will think you're mad but everithing has a price! :o)

Those color are mind-blowing! At the first glance I thought that picture was cropped too much, but then after closer look... everything is in place.

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  • Aegean Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1423 W: 14 N: 745] (2559)
  • [2003-12-04 10:31]

That's a great shot Yitzhak...Perfect composition and saturated colors...

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  • appie Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 1 N: 0] (8)
  • [2003-12-04 10:49]

Great shot and very well framed!

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2738 W: 784 N: 1902] (9445)
  • [2003-12-04 13:18]
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A fine close up, Yitzhak.
There is an historical link here you might not see. The swedish ball bearing company SKF that we see on those hubs have been accused of making big money out of World War II as a supplier to the German side. And now their product is in Israelian train cars..... Lets forgive but not forget, I guess.

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  • Motrem Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1107 W: 132 N: 319] (2392)
  • [2003-12-04 14:38]

Excellent composition embellish with images found well, attractive colours. Bravo!
Image bien trouvée, couleurs attirantes, composition excellente. Bravo!

30 points? You have done well, it seems, with this shot! Congratulations on a good eye!

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  • emax Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 395 W: 53 N: 52] (893)
  • [2003-12-05 2:12]

Incredible composition. The bordeaux colour its just beautiful. The yellow element its an adornment. Nice idea Yitzak.

The force of this picture is, in my opinion, not only in the amazing colours but in having caught some beauty in a usually quite unattractive detail. Well done!

Wonderfull shot Yitzhak. The colors are just great. Very nice subject, it's very original. The sharpness of the image is also well done. Nicely done again.

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