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Rails & Concrete
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21130)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-11-14
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus C-720
Exposure: f/3.4
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Patterns, Twins? [Part III] [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2003-11-14 3:33
Viewed: 1194
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Rails and concerete rail supports, at a trainyard in Bney Brak
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  • nwoehnl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9505 W: 682 N: 15166] (60118)
  • [2003-11-14 3:56]
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Very interesting recurring pattern, Yitzhak. Again, it looks like you've done some specific postprocessing to make it look a bit more abstract (and maybe the white is coming out just a tad too bright). I guess without your note I might have needed some time to figure out what I'm looking at. But I really like it - after having understood the pattern, it made me go look for elements that deviate from the pattern. Guess that's a good thing.

  • Great 
  • olli Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1234 W: 995 N: 64] (2091)
  • [2003-11-14 4:04]
  • [2]

Great rusty rails and horizontal lines in them – in your shot too ;-) Excellent abstract trainyard shot with great repetition. BTW, did you use some PS filter?

  • Great 
  • henrye Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 764 W: 67 N: 430] (3493)
  • [2003-11-14 4:41]
  • [2]

Very interesting pattern you found here. The rusty metal and cement colors go well together. Good composition. Well done.

  • Great 
  • orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2011 W: 139 N: 1495] (6572)
  • [2003-11-14 5:02]

Good composition. Interesting patterns, even in the diagonal lighting. Nice colours. Well seen.

If I stare at this for long enough, it becomes 3-dimensional. An extremely weird effect, presumably due to the lighting and to the mesmerising effect of the recurring pattern.

  • Good 
  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5473 W: 504 N: 7191] (32616)
  • [2003-11-14 5:43]

Seems like you and ollie have been in to the same "creative box" for collecting the pics. today. Interesting motive.

  • Great 
  • Edwin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 878 W: 379 N: 161] (2035)
  • [2003-11-14 8:47]

A very appealing repetition of shapes you have here Yitzhak! Well seen!

Like the simplicity in the geometry, the light and shadow interaction of the sleepers and the rails, the suggestion of rust reflected as tiger's eye.

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6159 W: 3196 N: 7475] (27842)
  • [2003-11-14 13:41]

Ha ! Si je fixe plus d'une minute je vais être hypnotisé :-) C'est vertigineux !
L'image est symétrique et en relief 3D.

Ha! If I fix more than one minute I will be hypnotized: -) It's vertiginous! The picture is symmetrical and in relief 3d.

Are you trying to create me vision problems?! I hardly can focus on this one! :-)

Very nice efect with the subtle perspective working well here. About the colors they almost look watercolor. Good contrasting colors also.

A great composition that again gives us a fresh look at ordinary things - and that's what art is about.

This pattern is attractive. I've seens these stacks several times but never thought to capture like you did. Good one Yitzhak

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