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Curiosity
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4689 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21138)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 500 N
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-07 23:59
Viewed: 1066
Points: 44
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wonderful capture, Yitzhak!
this image has all elements to tease our curiosity!
excellent!

Ahah! I like this scene Yitzhak. Curiosity is definitely one of the characteristics we bring from childhood and carry all our lives. In a certain way, looking through a camera viewfinder isn't really different of what we're seeing here. The photograph seems a bit too bright for me. Pushing down the curves would have helped you to bring our more detail by reducing the bright highlights and giving place to the midtones.

Hi Yitzak,
This is wonderful. The two peeking kids look beautiful. The pattern of the metal plates gives an another atmosphere to the scene. The only point here is that the kids are at the wrong side. The sign says peeking has to be done at the right..:)))
Very well composed and sharp image. Good job and thanks for sharing...

Oh, what a good job you had your camera with you, and sure, you don't need a note for this. I like the backdrop the fence provides here, in fact so much, that I think I'd have preferred a tighter crop on the right, leaving out the sign.

Well seen and captured. Nice composition and specially with the arrow sign.

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  • olli Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1234 W: 995 N: 64] (2091)
  • [2005-04-08 3:22]

Excellent work – one of your best shots I think.
Very interesting subject. Beautiful vivid metallic wall. The sign and the red/white + black&white stripes are very strong graphic elements. This shot could work also in B&W because it looks (even as a color shot) a "classic" shot by H C-B...

Excellent pick Yitzhak!
it would have been nice in treklens too...

congratulations

loic

Hi Yitzhak, what a lovely scene! The smaller one, hanging against the corrugated wall, and the other just peeping over his head. I agree with Gal, that it could be a bit darker, but other than tha, it's really a lovely image.

very nice shot Itzhak.. I like everything here.. all the children the world over are curious.. But atthe same time in this image there is more, much more, with all those lines, the colors..
A beautiful one..

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  • Bos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 180 W: 52 N: 22] (613)
  • [2005-04-08 12:24]

good composition, i like the two peeking boys and the red of the curbs with the blue of the sign give the photo some nice contrast

funny, sweet, very graphical and as someone else pointed out, it tells a story. the arrow is the part of the story that you, the photographer, are telling. great.

Ha, this funny, very, very funny, this scene !
The arrow mentions, that they have to be here, but they're looking through the steely wall, nice seen and nice captured !

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8768 W: 923 N: 11775] (57281)
  • [2005-04-09 3:52]

Hi Yitzhak

Well seen & shot, with excellent sharpness & graphism. I like the arrow. Well done!

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5512 W: 499 N: 7258] (33014)
  • [2005-04-09 5:05]

Even with no notes I think we get the idea of these two boys wery courious on what's taking place inside the fence. Simple compo, telling it's story, good work Yitzhak.

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  • kikvel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 810 W: 60 N: 1167] (4764)
  • [2005-04-09 14:14]

Hi Yitzhak

the title is very clever and very appropiate for the picture

very good timing, you have grabbed them very well.

K.

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  • torben Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 963 W: 331 N: 578] (3063)
  • [2005-04-10 14:56]

The bold graphical shapes sets a very distinctive scene for these two small kids to act in. I like the contrast of these two dark figures against all the linear bright shapes, I think it's good that the photo is this bright, it shouldn't be any darker, the black frame is plenty to keep balance in the tonal range. And of course, their curiosity brings a smile to our faces :-)

Yes, the title says it all and the picture tells a story. Graphically also excellent, with all those lines and the traffic sign, and blue/red combination on the overall gray tones is also well seen. Fine catch, and you made me curious now. What where they looking at? ;-).

Magnifique Yitzhak quelle belle scène de la vie quotidienne, ces petits curieux pris sur le faît c'est très beau. J'aime bien la composition avec le sens obligatoire et toujours le jeu de ligne. Amitié/jt

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  • alimo3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 488 W: 112 N: 97] (6708)
  • [2005-04-13 16:47]

Hi Yitzhak,
hihihi this is very funny ,
congratulation for this great capture,i noticed from your album that you are very good to catch this kind of moment.
i also like the smart combination with the trafic sign.
very well seen.

Tom

Perfectly caught moment. It is difficult not thinking what has drawn their attention. Even the trafic sign showing almost the same direction is nice coincidence. Regards...

Excellent shot! Very fine and well captured theme of this curious boy. Nice lighting too!

Very nice shot.
Good sense of oportunity....
In color or B&W this pohoto is very nice....

Jorge Amorim

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