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Wall
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21130)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-10
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Fuji FinePix F601Zoom
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-23 13:28
Viewed: 678
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A wall (and a part of a lower roof)of a grain silo, near the trainyard of Bney Brak.

Tech: Crop, adjustments of brightness, contrast and color, frame.
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  • sohrab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1362 W: 254 N: 1175] (7405)
  • [2004-12-23 13:59]

hello yitzhak
im quite illiterate when it comes to such abstract shots.. but im trying to make an effort to understand such photogrpahs :)
to be honest im not able to interpret anything here :)
but i find the patterns very interesting...
especially the way the stripes change from slants to straights
take care :)

Gosto das texturas e do efeito abstrato criado nessa imagem. Otimo trabalho Yitzhak.

Merry Christmas.

  • Great 
  • orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2011 W: 139 N: 1495] (6572)
  • [2004-12-23 22:52]

Another great abstract shot, Yitzhak. The textures in this one are just excellent. Good colours. I have tried taking shots like this, but I fail miserably - maybe I will have more luck in 2005 - or I can just enjoy yours.
Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Peaceful and Prosperous New Year.

Excellent textural study, Itzik - the wall with its crisp surface and color degradations is well rendered, and it was necessary to keep the roof part for interest and an alternate pattern. Nice one.
A merry Christmas to you and family, and may 2005 be peaceful, healthy and bring you all you wish for.

I like this, seeing how far you push an idea. Great graphic effect.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12343 W: 246 N: 16228] (64868)
  • [2004-12-24 7:35]

A modern painting Yitzhak, the wall on the background have very soft colours, the lines on the forground give a nice perspective.
Merry Christmans Yitzhak and peace in the world.

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8647 W: 911 N: 11403] (55282)
  • [2004-12-24 18:09]

Hi Yitzhak

A good study of texture, line & patterns, but it needs a central area of focus & interest, imho. Merry Xmas!

  • Great 
  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4587 W: 393 N: 4175] (18494)
  • [2004-12-24 19:56]

I agree with the others - this a Yitzhak ;-) - very excellent spotted, I like the diffent textures and even with the same colours - Fine job and well framed - Thanks.

Intersting photo Itzik. The colors and nice to look at and all the details, lines and shapes make for a good abstract photo.

A real Yitzhak again, a sober effective colored graphic. Perfect ! Merry Xmas.

Quite stunning lines and textures and patterns, really good work, simple but effective, enjoy the holidays

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  • ishai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 118 N: 309] (4066)
  • [2005-12-03 16:40]

Another beautiful “Avigur” POV
Amazing simplistic and beautiful cropped
Maybe a bit overexposed but its still jump out of my screen


Ishai

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