Photographer’s Note
Wish....
I photograph This young lady in this field in a real time, when she was praying after she lost here home in Gaza strip.
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espanek
(995) 2007-05-19 5:55
Hello Yoram.
Very interesting composition. Nice model and pose. Also nice, warm colours. But there is something disturbing in the grass, behind girl's leg. I tried workshop to remove this object.
Regards,
Wojciech.
partha
(13655) 2007-05-19 6:31
Hi yoram ,
Excellent atmosphere. Nice positioning of the girl.
Good shot.
regards.
partha
wolf38
(12489) 2007-05-19 8:42
Hello yoram. A wonderful and impressing picture. In addition an informative text. But the picture would fit also into each fairy tale book. Very beautifully. Best regards, Wolfgang.
lasscor
(7623) 2007-05-19 14:48
Hi Yoram.
Lovely portrait.
Nice peaceful scene.
Nice warm colors.
TFS,
Corinne
asival
(4216) 2007-05-20 6:29
Hi Yoram
Another beautiful composition.
I really love the layers of colors on the young woman clothes and how they fit to the layers on that field…
Those two images of yours are an excellent start … welcome to TE
Assi
niknik
(112) 2007-06-01 6:14
Tov Me-od, Yoram,
The photo tells a beautiful story of loss, hope and faith. I love the colours and composition.
Wandering_Dan
(3171) 2007-09-15 9:02
It's a very poignant picture, especially with the explanatory note. And well composed. But I agree with Wojciech that the white object - even it is a stone rather than the trash it appears to be - is a distraction that should be removed. I use post-processing to remove (but not add) objects because I see photography as art - making a comment about the world in an aesthetically oriented medium - rather than as journalism - reporting the world as it is. Different point of view.
Tselem yofi. L'shana tovah.
rhamza (94) 2007-09-15 9:08
Hi Yoram,
I really liked this photo of the young lady praying after her loss. Very poignant indeed. You have captured the moment superbly.
Cheers!
Rashid
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