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#400
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4689 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21138)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 500 N, 75-300 1:4-5.6 II
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): A pair of photos with contrast [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-11-15 14:17
Viewed: 861
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot from the beach of Rishon Letzion.
Cropped. adjusted levels, clarify, frame.

BTW, this is my 400th photo on TE.
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A wonderfull diagonal composition. Nice tones in the sea. And that little wave is just sweet.
Happy 400th :)
anton

My compliments for your picture number 400. Full of joy and action. Few elements, great shot. Perhaps I'd take away the sand. The almost imaginary diagonal is beautiful

Congratulations on your 400th posting Yitzhak. Good subject, and nicely composed. Satisfying simple compo.

Happy 400, Itzik. Great diagonal compo with the two main elements in opposing corners, delightfully backed by the deep blue sea. The single splashing wave at the bottom is a delightful detail.

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  • Piotr Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1004 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-11-15 15:29]

Great composition, specially I like this different tones of water colour and perfect framed
Regards Yitzhak
piotr

Well well my friend, we have similar photos... Good shot and well framed action. I like that we see the kite and all and nothing esle in the photo. Good colors and sharpness.

Congrats on the 400. You know that comes out to more than 30 points average by photo. That's really incredible Itzik.

Hi Yitzhak, quite a milestone! Congratulations.
You took a fine shot for this event, summerly, with nice colours and layers in the water. Perfect diagonal composition.

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8776 W: 920 N: 11780] (57333)
  • [2004-11-16 4:26]

A superb blue sea, & a great diagonal linking the man with the parasail. The breaking surf adds some highlight tonal variety.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12738 W: 272 N: 17013] (68088)
  • [2004-11-16 6:28]

Hi Yitzhak, congratulations for you 400th photo, the white diagonal lines of the sail and the colours its lovely, the blue water and the small white golfs roller make a great picture Yitzhak!

Great composition, the sea in different hues, and the sail on diagonal make here the point.

400 photographies Yitzhak, ce n'est pas rien. Vous êtes un membre très fidèle sur le site. Grâce à vous nous avons pu apprécier différentes facettes de votre talent.
La photo présentée est intéressante, j'ai l'impression que la personne qui tient le cerf-volant ne va pas tarder à décoller eu égard à la voilure importante !
Bien vu, Yitzhak.
Merci de votre fidélité.

Excellent dirgonal composition, great strong colour and contrast in photo.

Regards kaj Nielsen

very nice scene Yitzhak. I like the composition of hthis shot. Blue and the gy on the left and the sail..
Very nice colors too..
Here it's more like winter...

Very nice graphism again here, Yitzhak. I like particulary the colors and the wave alone. Well done! Happy 400th!

excellent, excellent cropping Yitzhak! The red kite against the blue water looks great. very good composition too. That little wave makes a nice diversion too.
Congrats on nr 400!

very nice compositon here with the diagonal line and main subjects in the opposite corners, clever shot

congratulations for your #400, Avigur. I hope you continue to share with us the excellent work you´ve been doing!

great crop. just exact to compose an image that breaths summer :D

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  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4590 W: 390 N: 4188] (18560)
  • [2004-11-21 14:48]
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Sorry Yitzhak - that I missed this one :-) Congratulation with your shot #400 ;-) - a simple and very fine composition - I like that diagonal line and the way ligth and shadow mix on the paraglide - thanks - this work surely have your mark - you should be proud.

400 photos was very good, Yitzhak, but today you have more...
It is very good, excellent colours and diagonal, sharpness and perspective. Very good work!

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