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Copyright: Igor Sadowski (yogi32) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 139 W: 0 N: 14] (742)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-11
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon PowerShot S70
Exposure: f/5.3, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-16 10:47
Viewed: 904
Points: 1
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Kfar-Nahum, Sea of Galilee.
Greek Orthodox Monastery of Saint Apostics, Capernahum.
Капернаум (Кфар Нахум).


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To kevinos: hello Kevin,yogi32 1 03-16 15:38
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What an interesting and colorful location! The trouble, for me, is that the composition looks too messy, to unresolved. It is dominated by the strong horizontal line made by the two walls. These divide the frame top and bottom into two nearly equal parts. This feels uncomfortable (unresolved duality). The eye prefers one to predominate. Thus what is the focus of interest in your picture? If it is the church, then there is too much distracting detail in front; if it is the ruins -clearly Roman ruins with Corinthian columns- then the church is too distraction. You have used a deep DoF which give equal prominence to each part of the frame. It might have been better to have made your picture out of the church or the ruins, but not both. You have a lovely Mediterranean light which brings out every detail and texture of the ruins very well and produces a lovely soft colour. Regards Kevin

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