Shepherd, Your sheep are weary
Cold and tired, battered and bruised and torn
Shepherd, Your sheep are hungry
We got what we wanted but we still need something more
We need to hear Your voice
Whatever You might say
We just need to hear Your voice
Show us the way
Shepherd, Your sheep are lost
We chased our wants that we thought were needs
Now we can't get home
Shepherd, Your sheep are longing
We ate and we ran, we played and we danced, but we're empty
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tusharkmandal (3171) 2011-07-09 0:09
A wonderful one. Th background curves and textures is superb. The golden colors of the whole frame steals the show. I like the poem very much.
kato (11630) 2011-07-09 0:27
You're capturing well this sheep's pasturing spectacle by excellent tone and good composition, so it's impressive and interesting to see a lot of sheep that have been set loose to the field of striped pattern with gradual inclination. The sheep seems to be eating pasture hard. It's impressive in the spectacle that a shepherd is watching them, too.
billakos773 (253) 2011-07-12 10:54
A LOVELY SHOT,WITH FANTASTIC GOLDEN COLOR OF THE LAND,SO COMMON IN OUR COUNTRIES,BUT SO WELL DONED!!!
ALSO THE POEM IS VERY GOOD!!
- Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) (22069)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2011-07-07
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS 350D/Rebel XT, 75-300 1:4-5.6 II
- Exposure: f/11, 1/500 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2011-07-08 21:33