Bricks

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• mdchachi (1597)
• [2004-07-03 19:42]

I like the pattern here. I think the shot would be better without the shadow. I would probably go for a closer crop to cut it out.

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• ishai (4074)
• [2004-07-04 7:13]

I like the colors in this composition
There is a kind of symmetry in it
I don’t think that this construction is a solid one by the look of the shape of the bricks.
But never the less I find the shadow in this composition helpful

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• erthmuffin (1388)
• [2004-07-07 15:44]
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i like the various colors even though it's a repetative pattern. i'm not sure if i like the shadow or not. maybe this would be nice with more contrast and a border? but i think it's nice how it is. also, a note is always nice.

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• jrzufferey (7487)
• [2005-01-18 12:40]

Très joli ton mur irrégulier de briques rouges, j'aime cette faon de clore,d'arrêter le regard, ta composition est très intêressante. Amicalement/jr