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Spray
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4689 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21138)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-24
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Fuji FinePix F601Zoom
Exposure: f/8, 1/420 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-11-28 13:50
Viewed: 649
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A picture taken during a firemen train course that took place in the old plant where used to work.
You can see more photos from this event in my Firemen in Action theme .

Tech: Crop, partial de-saturation (everything except the red hose), and frame.

PLD_images, robiuk, sayzey, ChrisJ, jhm, nwoehnl has marked this note useful
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This was a very good theme that I enjoyed a lot Itzik. It's nice to see more from it. This is a good photo with simple composition but a powerfull subject. You have framed it just right. I really like the partial desaturation, it's a technique that gives intersting results and you have managed it well here my friend. Nice job.

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9622 W: 450 N: 15463] (54196)
  • [2004-11-28 14:15]

Well Yitzhak,
This is an artfull photo, I really like the choosing for the black and white in combination with the red en bluy unther, very good job I like it.

Very cool. It really emphasizes the power of water and its beauty. The desaturation is perfect as is the frame.

PS I still have so much to learn from your photos.

When I see your theme, I think I should take pictures of firemans one of these days... I like the desaturation except the red, universal color of firemans around the world. Well seen also for the framing of the water!

This is style graphic, reholded red in B&W with perfect framing. Perfect sharp not overexposed by contrast and very wet !
Perfect Yitzhak.
Henk

Simple but very nice photo Yitzhak, great capture and composition, nice angle and interesting background for this presentation, good framing, I like these creative shot, well done.

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  • robiuk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2021 W: 177 N: 2294] (9891)
  • [2004-11-28 18:45]

Excellent framing, Yitzhak.
From an ordinary everyday scene (ordinary 4 firemen) you made very interesting, almost abstract shot.
Partial desaturation has its reasons and helps the composition.
It's hard not to like this one!

Very nice shot, I especially like the hose! When you say you desaturated everything except the hose, how did you do this, did you cut it out as a seperate layer, or do you have some other kind of technique.

I have a shot which I would like to use a simialar effect with however woudl rather not spend hours closely cutting out the detailed parts!

Again I like how you have captured the spray like that, its great!

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  • c_kyr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 822 W: 88 N: 343] (1810)
  • [2004-11-28 22:16]

The power of the water spray is very well captured.
I like the framing in this shot, as the water defines the diagonal.
Very good work.

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8765 W: 923 N: 11773] (57261)
  • [2004-11-29 3:57]

Another good use of desaturation & grain, with a strong & simple diagonal composition.

very nice shot Yitzhak. I love the all composition of this image.
I would really like to see the original.
Nice graphism, a job well executed.

very original and it works fine;-) good compo and placement of the water pipe in the frame..-)

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12701 W: 272 N: 16936] (67790)
  • [2004-11-29 5:54]

Hi Yitzhak, the power of the water spray is very well captured. This is a good photo with simple composition but a powerfull subject. Great capture and composition, nice angle and interesting background for this presentation, good framing.
Well seen!

Great colours, I like the water graffics and also the red on the ground, very well taken, good job

Same technique as in the traffic sign shot, same simplicity of composition, and again an effective result, Itzik. Very good to have the spraying hose in the lower right corner, and to have the jet of water powerfully going towards the opposite corner. A late, but very nice add-on to your theme.

Youve made such a simple situation look so good on photograph. The minimal colouring on this works well.

toujours beaucoup d'originalité Yitzhak, beau travail, bravo.
amitié/ martine.
désolée à sec demain.

It's a classic Yitzhak. Very nice work. The de-saturation works very well. I love it.

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  • bfly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 238 N: 1058] (5675)
  • [2004-12-24 9:43]

hi Yitzhak,
very good graphism..after a long time away, I would still think it's yours without reading the name..I like the pattern of wooden platforms behind and contrast of sprayed water drops on them a lot..beautiful bw tones too..
I wish you the best in new year :)
fusun

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