ahwaz is one of the city in W-south of IRAN.
(photo with bad scannig , sorry,I will solve it in future soon)
birds flying occured in 10 second & I was ready &
I know photo is simple but I would like to send it for pro.friends.
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kourosh (2346) 2004-03-24 6:14
Hi Mohammad. welcome to TE.
despite the scanning problem i think this is very nice shot. good angle, nice silhouettes. i thought of cropping the bottom, it may improve the composition.
Ebbe (9617) 2004-03-24 12:56
Welcome to TE Mohammad! Your picture has a special feeling with the silhouetted bridge and all the birds. Nice light to from golden to cool blue. I took the liberty of playing a little with it in a workshop.
optic (0) 2004-04-03 11:04
Hello Mohammad welcome to Trekearth, i appreciate this view including peoples on the bridge, well done!
giladf (304) 2004-04-05 10:36
Very nice shot! I love the shaddows on the bridge, the blue skyes with the gold water, just great!
cloverstar (0) 2004-04-10 10:30
Your quick decision to shoot when the birds were flying has really given this architectural photo a nice naturalistic touch. Ebbe's workshop has enhanced the colours well.
Good work, Mohammed, and welcome to TrekEarth.
Vagabond (5848) 2004-04-22 7:31
Very good picture in composition and colours. A favourite for me
ninfa_urania (803) 2004-06-08 0:32
Hello Mohammad: It is a beautiful picture, I like to appreciate the harmony of these elements: people, technology and nature, around this work built by the man. They are many birds they seem to form a whirl, I like the image in two colors: golden and blue sky, do I admire her of below up, in the inferior part I do like the golden effect with which begins, the reflection of the water, the golden color of the river, in the means, the bridge and their details in the base, the vegetation, do I want to wonder something that that detail is in the vegetation in cross form? is vegetation? in some parts they seem you hoist small but I am not sure, perhaps it is part of some buildings. Thank you to share this image with us. Cordial greetings. *Ninfa Urania*
bartove (2866) 2004-06-17 0:34
very nice shot I love the peoples on the bridge,and the birds silhouet.
Kenny10pin (19301) 2004-11-13 18:08
birds galore here, really good bridge shot, well done with the composition and the colours.
Have a good holiday Mohammad, see you soon on here
Galmeida (12559) 2005-04-24 16:50
It's your first picture at TE and scanned like some that I post here at TE. This critique is a simbolic way to tell you that The first picture is the beginning of life, and you post a nice picture. Not quality but a soul aspiring better work and the understand of others. I use this approach with you in this momment, because I surely have no absolutely problem with you, but in the road of life somebody not you, make a a critique and his quotes is smiley by half, and what was strange is that asked if I used this or that!
The judjement is made not asking the experimental creator for one reason that the judge in is first approach asks the victim. This is surrealist!!!
About your way of tell things: I and we know very well both, for our sharing opinions and photos. Possible your way of being active and share humor opinions with so many people, could be in some moments, a near plataform to install more confusion that was necessary. It's your natural way of being, and here you have my sincerely word for that momment and a good critique of your great initial work and apprach to TE. What in resume I say, sometimes is better to say nothing in public, and let the caravan pass away.
Your last photo is my 100 Favourite list, that values many points for us and our work.
Great Mohammad and great first post!!!
jmdaoudal (82) 2005-05-27 4:24
I suddenly had the idea to go at your first shot here, just to have I idea of your evolution in the community and in photography.
I am very happy to remark it seems you already were at the level from today, good ideas of things to show, good composition and the difference with today is the camera and the ability to adapt the post to the internet screens.
Well done for this one I had the pleasure to look at.
- Copyright: Mohammad E Hesamian (elihesamian) (26149)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-12-00
- Categories: Nature
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Bridges I, Sunsets Portfolio, Clouds Portfolio, Birds Portfolio [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-03-24 6:10
- Favorites: 2 [view]