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Photographer’s Note

picture is taken in road to Alamut, a region in north of Qazvin, a city close to capital, Tehran..
Alamut is known by its ancient castle related to Hassan Sabah (a history about 1000 years ago)..
Me and my brother were driving in a sunny day and the loneless of tree made us to stop there and take some pictures, this is the 1 i select 4 here...

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kiks (6173) 2007-08-09 0:53

Hi Maghshood, your composition is simple but beautiful. I like the rythem on it.
Pitty that yoou have no note. That woud be useful.
TFS
KIks

carlab (2087) 2007-08-09 1:04 [Comment]

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smarcell (14715) 2007-08-09 1:04

I like the shadows created by the bumps of snow. Good composition. I posted a workshop, in which I removed the bottom part, the one withous snow.

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Heaven (0) 2007-08-09 1:21

Hi Maghsood!

The idea of your picture and the subject itself are interesting and you managed quite well the lightning, although the tree is a bit too dark (details lost).

From my point of view, your picture lacks of its composition, the tree is far too much on the right, to close to the border of the picture. I also would crop part of the foreground that differs from the rest. And it's really too bad that you didn't take the time for some notes...

Kind regards
Markus

holmertz (10115) 2007-08-09 2:15

Hello Maghsood,
I appreciate that you managed to add something to the tired old TE theme: the lonely tree. The curvy pattern of the ground makes it an interesting picture. But I agree with those who argue that the foreground could be cropped for an even better effect.
Regards,
Gert

xavis (3176) 2007-08-09 2:17

Hola,
Good job, not easy to take this picture with the sun and the snow. Good exposure, and beautifoul the shadow. Just, if I can give you my opinion, I think that you don't leave enought place to the tree in the right part. But is a good job, and I like the composition with the rows of land and the shadow tree who breaks this pattern. If you like this kind of picture (tree and snow) I propose you to see one of the pictures of Iva_R and I have another one.
I wait for your critics if you want, I think is the best way to improve our work.

Best regards,

Javier

murattepe1 (75) 2007-08-09 3:52

hi
wonderful shot
but it would be nice composition with useful note
thanx
murat

zumoduvas (1974) 2007-08-09 10:49

Hello Maghsood.

Excellent image, nice composition.
Fantastic.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

kourosh (2368) 2007-08-11 3:26

Excellent image! I might have tried another cmposition but still I like this a lot.

Atousa (3524) 2007-08-12 2:23

Salam,
Beautiful composition ! I really like its loneliness ,its shadow and great lines in this shot.
Well done,
Atousa

poocha (600) 2008-06-05 11:10

intersting and well compose picture in graphic style .And I'd like to know what parallel lines are.Is the tree big or small one.I think that it's the big tree ( from it's shape )so the white background may be the mountain or something big,right?