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• gabrielpat (5802)
• [2006-09-16 18:33]
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hi hooman,
nice movement of the child.maybe a bit too grey??welcome.

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• francbois (480)
• [2006-09-16 22:49]

Hi Hooman!
Wonderful portraiture, one of the most vivid kind! It really moves me deep, had I seen the same as a simple pencil sketch it would have had the same effect... Emotion is burstting out of the posture you so precisely caught, and the PoV leaves no possible expectation.
I like your b&w, and cannot think of an advice for further pix; so I just expect them to be good! Thanks a lot, take care, F'

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• saeedabbasi (280)
• [2006-09-17 0:33]
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• farshid (363)
• [2006-09-17 9:56]

salam Hooman

amazing shot!!
eyes that are covered with hair makes it mystic and give it more immpresion!!

i like the mood!!
nice Tone too
well done
Looking forward to seeing your new shots!!

well done
FAFA

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• Davoud (231)
• [2006-09-17 14:39]
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[Persian language / English characters]
salam Hooman
be TE khosh aamadi
akse kheyli zibaeeye & ehsase khoobi ro montaghel mikone , inke khire shode & dare jaee ro negah mikone kheyli jalebe & konjkav konande ast
ye meghdari az bala age crop mishod , shayad behtar bood
mamnoonam
Davoud

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• RGatward (19155)
• [2006-09-17 17:45]

Welcome to TE Hooman. Nicely executed child portrait for your first pose, with a good pose caught, though I think I'd have cropped tighter above

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• travellingtales (107)
• [2006-09-17 21:18]

Wow, very cute! Nice use of B/W
jp

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• tuberose2461 (127)
• [2006-09-19 4:59]

Hi Hooman khan,

A very nice portrait of a girl with nice a B&W treatment.
I wish you would have accompanied it with a note.
Welcome to TE and I hope to see more beautiful photo's from you.

Merci
Maryam