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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Ali Akbar Abdolrashidi (abdolrashidi) (1233) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2008-04-11 |
| Categories: Daily Life |
| Camera: Sony Cybershot p200 |
| Exposure: f/2.8, 1/500 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2008-05-10 21:35 |
| Viewed: 308 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Two men in a m ild summer morning are conversing about their long memoriers. They seem old and retired men who have nothing to do except gathering in a remote park and reminding the past life. This scene is very common in the parks around Tehran. They sometimes remain until midnight. |
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- SteveH
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(1479) - [2008-05-10 22:47]
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Hi Ali, whilst I like the idea of an image of two old men talking in a park in Tehran, I don't think this image does it well. The men, the subject of your photo are so small that they are very difficult to see. The man on the right, particularly. There are many areas in the image which are overexposed, as you took it into the sun, and I can't see anything that looks to be in focus. Had you been closer to the men and on the other side, the light would have illuminated them rather than overexposing all of the image that was not shaded by the trees. I find the bush on the right to be distracting and not contributing much to the image. It is a matter of personal taste, but I also do not like the frame, nor the font/colour of the "aaa" at the bottom. If you feel the need to include a signature I suggest making it unobtrusive. Sorry for the hard words. regards, Steve
