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worldcitizen (7057) 2006-07-23 17:31
I like your POV and composition. You seem to be looking up as the girl approaches, and she looks good on the left side of the photo, with the buildings and path to her right.
ribeiroantonio (22637) 2006-07-23 19:51
Your POV is really good. The compo, light and colours are excellent. Very well done.
s10001in (0) 2006-07-23 20:32
This is really nice one & sharp but should have more bigger.
Davoud (241) 2006-07-24 2:49
[Persian language / English characters]
salebe , amma jaleb tar az khode aks baraye man mogheeiyate akkase
zaviyeye did kheyli zibast
asanak (1972) 2006-07-24 5:58
Dear Afshin ,
Another great shot in excellent light conditions.
I love all your shots!
Sharp and well balanced.
ninadev (5377) 2006-07-24 12:43
A very simple subject and composition but it works so well because IMO of the green jacket the girl is wearing, the same color as the trees in the background. I like the contrast between the traditional scarf on her head and the more modern socks and shoes whe is wearing.
saamb (1008) 2006-07-25 14:57
ohh, very nice colors and frame. i like her figure and look. this is a good image of persian girls as a sample. greetinf
Jacobp (798) 2006-07-26 4:36
akse ghashangiyeh.tamome chizhaash khobeh vali be nazare man ye kami taareh.
damet garm jacobp
farshid (365) 2006-07-28 6:43
wow ,nice composition.
i like the lighting.
merc az inke aksaye "Persian girl" mizari,bazam bezar
asadi-s (108) 2006-10-17 21:35
good colors but I think if you wanted to focus on the girl you should have unfocused the background