This little Iranian girl (in traditional bedouin clothing) doens't seem to be in "town" very often. Today she is and she checks out every shop and is espescially curious of what is happening in this barber shop.
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WALTERito (351) 2004-10-30 10:27
The subject is very good, the adding of the wall with posters also, but there's something awkward by putting the girl to the far left, making her look out of the picture. I think with some postprocessing some more detail can be brought in the front of the girl (brightening) and darkening a bit of the right-side.
No time to try myself at the moment.
cetrocomix (309) 2004-10-30 10:43
Nice and original picture. I imagine the curiousity of the girl discovering the town. Unfortunately the head of the girl, that is the main subject of the picture, is a bit dark. I tried workshop to improve it a little, not too much to not loose some natural. Hope you like it.