Out of line Photo | TrekEarth

Photographer’s Note

A man is enjoying the cool water in a hot morning on the beach in Bushehr south of Iran.

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ninaL (19300) 2007-08-11 3:41

Hi, Kourosh.
Beautiful in simplicity...
Smart, elegant composition with shining effects.
Best regards. Grazyna.

Dpbours (218) 2007-08-11 3:58

Hi Kourosh,

I like the shot. The man walking to the shore. It could be out of a movie, that whole composition. But there are some little things... I would have loved to see the wooden poles in the water to be a bit more black - with the shadow option / unsharp masking etc. And I feel the picture would have been stronger in real panoramic view, ie. 800 x 350 pix, cutting off a big part of the top and a little part of the bottom. The sky is a bit uneventful and the panoramic view might be a better way of presenting it! Just some ideas ;-).

Have a good weekend!
Dennis

Darren (6815) 2007-08-11 7:11

Hi Kourosh. I like a number of things about this shot. I like your positioning of the man and I also think the tree is a very good element. I can't help but wish that there were more details left in the sky though and I have to say that the heavy black frame suffocates this for me.

anes_lc (14762) 2007-08-11 8:51

i like the simplicity of the shot:)
great composition...and really i wouldn´t change nothing :D
thanks share
regards,anes

Atousa (3434) 2007-08-12 2:08

Salam Kourosh,
He is really out of line here! and this is one reason for good balance in the shot..the tree is another good element.I also like the mood of image- which doesn't reflect happiness -the reflections and texture of water.
Regards,
Atousa

mammad (3181) 2007-08-12 3:03