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Alone
Photo Information
Copyright: Ali Peyman (naval) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 17 W: 10 N: 2] (172)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-14
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon EOS 300D, Canon EF-S 18-55
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-13 20:53
Viewed: 752
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this one 2 years ago in my way to gheshm island in persian gulf.. the contrast has been increased and i played a bit with colors..
I`m not sure about the category, any suggestion ?
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To Aidin-Baftechi: photoshopnaval 1 10-27 12:09
To kebek: ,,,naval 1 10-14 17:54
To Wanda1: thank you wandanaval 1 10-14 17:51
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To haya: thnxnaval 1 10-14 17:26
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Lovely capture of this place; the colors are amazing, and the light coming through the clouds adds a nice thouch. I think the frame is a bit much, but overall a nice picture.

Wonderful shot,very great colors,very well composed

Seems a good image. The tower is the center of attraction as per rule of thirds. The frame is taking extra space. Insead the image can be enlarged. It can be placed in architecture category in my opinion.

Nice image Ali. The PP is i must say very obvious, although it kind of works. I would be interested to see the image in its original form (or close to), because i think it has enough to carry it without all that adjustment. Too much PP for two green smilies, sorry ;).Jez

Great PP work Ali, it looks quite surreal ... but very spectacular. Some great compositional elements in this shot.
Good work, thanks for sharing
Rew

Hi Ali,
Beautiful shot with the lovely light coming throught the clouds. Composition is great, nice saturated colours.
Regards
Wanda

Hi Ali

good, a little unusual colours. Nice compo and beautifull light. I think it could go into Nature, Landscape category too.

Regards Darko

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  • kebek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 55 N: 1079] (5420)
  • [2006-10-14 6:48]
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Serwus Ali !
Very eyecatching image. The red lighthouse in the strong point of the rame stands out against this lighting effects. The frame is really distracting for me, but it's always a personal taste. The image itself is lovely.
Best wishes,
Mat

wow che aksi kheili zibast va royai

khosham oomad merC
khoshhal misham sari ham be ma bezani

beautiful photo with nice frame

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  • stego Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3438 W: 584 N: 4487] (13694)
  • [2006-10-15 16:04]

I like its surrealism, dramatism and the perfect compo. The colors are very nice, as the efects of light on the sky and the texture of the sea.
I wonder if some more shrapness wouldn't be good for the rocks and lighthouse and if some less PP wouldn't result in a nice image too.

Architecture and/or Nature I guess..
Nice light, but the sharpness, especially on the lighthouse, could be increased somewhat. Maybe the contrast a bit less..

Hi ali.
THX for your critique on my pic. this is very nice shot. excellent POV, colors ans contrast.
Regards
Movaffag Bashi

nice photo and you'd found an extraordinary sky and clouds , but i think the contrast is not normal and that's too high ,did you use any special filter e.g polariser or something else ?

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  • Sarena (0)
  • [2006-11-02 11:08]

i give you 2 points for you editing. but in my oppinion, i am not a fan of photoshop...

Hello Ali! Wonderful composition with a great colours, light and sharpness! Nice frame, too. Well done! Lili

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  • kaptan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 325 W: 71 N: 70] (1330)
  • [2007-05-02 11:14]

Selam Ali
very good frame.Fantastic.Thanks.Nezih

Wonderful picture. However, I would like to see the original.

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