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BilboCA (734) 2009-07-20 17:48

Hi, Andreas,

This landscape is attractive, which gives you a starting point. But I don't see much of a focal point to draw the viewer's attention.

I have a few post-processing suggestions for you to consider, too.
(1) The large commitment of the frame to purely blue sky is probably unwise. I would suggest you crop it out.
(2) The little bit of rock (?) in the foreground is distracting. I would suggest you crop it out, too.
(3) The rendering of colors in the landscape can be made more pleasing by increasing the black level in post-processing.
(4) The photo could also benefit from sharpening in post-processing.

To illustrate the effect, I've posted a workshop version. See what you think.

Regards,
- William